2-storey Modern

pa C&C na lng mga masters
sketchup vray render

This is okay, but it can be improve more! composition po ng whole image, tingin-tingin po kayo sa net para magkaroon po ng idea / reference yung mga magagandang composition ng vegetation, sa lighting naman po hanap lang kayo ng reference photo tapus yung ang gayahin nyo sa lighting setup mas mapapdali work nyo at mas accurate po. tsaka po seguro yung camera level mas ok po yung man's eye level since reisidential po yung subject nyo pero mayroon din naman na exception dyan minsan mas okay din yung bird's/arial eye or worms eye dependi po sa sitwasyon at kagustohan ng gumagawa... salamat po sa pag-post dito ng gawa nyo.

first post po ba?Welcome po
*cam correction po,keep it eye level lang.
*mas maganda po kung nakafocus lang sa structure,you don't need to show
those grass,modeled pati sir,nakakapabigat pa yan sa model at mas matagal ang render time.
*experiment more on lighting,don't just hit the render button
*mas okay sir kung parepareho yung mga cgpeeps,yung iba kasi 2d,

keep practicing makukuha po din natin yan!
visit the tutorial section here,dami ka pong matutunan from our masters Godbless!

nice render

-stair in the carport maliit masyado
-looks like there''s no flooring in your terrace
-trellis at left portion tanggalin mo nalang may maliit naman na canopy para sa sun buffer lipat mo nalang sa wallcurtain mo

-increase mo pa ang sun size multiplier para hindi sharp shadow mo 15 pwede na.

sana makatulong

imho lang po

-pa share ng road mapping pwede




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welcome sa CGP sir..
imho lang po.
aside from the terrace na parang walang flooring, in my view, parang wala namang beam..
railings from the second balcony looks low..

wrong section pala to.pakilipat na lang sir tong thread niyo sa WIP section natin

scale po..