Re: Updated Breakout area

Hi again Cgians,
new post from a breakout area for doha proj. C&c are most welcome. God bless
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d) Updated from image 1


e) additional DOF



f) Updated image 1 using vray sun



g) Update DOF with vray sun

Sir,
oks na oks ang render mo. I have no comment na pati ang ang lighting mo.
Sana turuan mo rin ako ng v-ray hehe........

God Bless

nice one sir aldrin... like the second image..pa order ng capucino hehehe...sarap mag coffe break.. keep it up sir..

my comment is overbright ung mga ibang part. ung mat ng mga upuan sir nagbleblend na sa ilaw na bumubuga sa may kaliwa. to avoid this kahit na malakas ung ilaw dun. cguro 220,220 ,220 na rgb is ok na. and falloff. imho opinion lang sir. medyo kapansin pansin din ung pendant lamp mo sa table lamp mo sir. magkapareho.kung breakout yan sir ndi mo na need ung table lamp mga decor or magazine na lang. lumulutang ung isang magazine sir. sori sir. un lang po comment ko. pero i think minor lang naman mga un... post more...

modeling and rendering is good bro..but master pakunat said already...ung sakin lang po prang mxdo mbaba ang ceiling height...nice dof effect

i second to sir pakunat.... but i like the 2nd image... nice mood...

overbright yung ibang part pero ok p din...

nice render bro nasabi na nila lahat keep it up

firt image a bit burn out. i will go with the exposure of the 2nd image.

pakunat wrote:my comment is overbright ung mga ibang part. ung mat ng mga upuan sir nagbleblend na sa ilaw na bumubuga sa may kaliwa. to avoid this kahit na malakas ung ilaw dun. cguro 220,220 ,220 na rgb is ok na. and falloff. imho opinion lang sir. medyo kapansin pansin din ung pendant lamp mo sa table lamp mo sir. magkapareho.kung breakout yan sir ndi mo na need ung table lamp mga decor or magazine na lang. lumulutang ung isang magazine sir. sori sir. un lang po comment ko. pero i think minor lang naman mga un... post more...

Sir parekoy,
Thanks for the c&c from your end. Try ko to reduce overbright. And then doon sa kaliwa po white fabric from top and bottom po is red fabric. Lamp as specified by client to use same family of light. But the magazine tama kayo nkalutang nga he he he. Galing ninyo ha. Anyway, render ko ule ito to correct it. Great c&c sir. I'll update ito. God bless

nomeradona wrote:firt image a bit burn out. i will go with the exposure of the 2nd image.

Sir,
Thanks sa c&c ninyo. I'll update it. God bless

arki_vhin wrote:modeling and rendering is good bro..but master pakunat said already...ung sakin lang po prang mxdo mbaba ang ceiling height...nice dof effect

Sir, Thanks sa c&c. yez ceiling is low. I can't do anything with the height eh. God bless

jay3design wrote:nice render bro nasabi na nila lahat keep it up

Sir Jay,
Thanks sa c&c ninyo rin. I'll update na lang base sa c&c. God bless

Butz_Arki wrote:overbright yung ibang part pero ok p din...

Sir, Thanks sa c&c i'll update na lang. God bless

ERICK wrote:i second to sir pakunat.... but i like the 2nd image... nice mood...

Sir, Thanks sa c&c rin ninyo. 2nd image yan din gusto. God bless i'll update na lang.

madzki wrote:nice one sir aldrin... like the second image..pa order ng capucino hehehe...sarap mag coffe break.. keep it up sir..

Sir Madzki,
Thank you sa c&c ninyo rin. dalawa na kayo may gusto ng 2nd image. God bless

mel_pinili wrote:Sir,
oks na oks ang render mo. I have no comment na pati ang ang lighting mo.
Sana turuan mo rin ako ng v-ray hehe........

God Bless

Sir, Thanks sa c&c ninyo po. Sige pag may time PM ka doon mo ask mga gusto mong matutunan sa vray. God bless

tweak na lang sa ps kulang you can do it

drew wrote:tweak na lang sa ps kulang you can do it

Sir,
Thanks sa c&c ninyo. Sir hindi ako masyado gumagamit ng ps eh. anyway i'll try din. God bless

nice render!ayos to bro.i think nahuli yata ako but the modification of vray setting was already good.
pashare nman ng pagiging henyo mo bossing.

Sir,
Thanks sa c&c mo. Sa PM mo na lang itanong ang gusto mo malaman. God bless.

sir.... ok po toh sir... nasabi na po nila lahat... mmmm... dagdag nlng po sir... baka makatulong... try to check po on ur color mapping... maxado na po ng desaturate ata... n f low ceiling po sir... maybe adjust nlng tau sa lighting fixture's height... un lang po sir... galing ng mga dof... like the orchids.

sir,
Thanks for the c&c ninyo. God bless