Exterior rendering -practice ulit

Hello CGPinoy people!!! here is my second post using 3ds max. criticism and comments are welcome!!!

needed adjustments:

saturation, slate texture, lighting on shaded area, glass material, roof tile scale.
nice start thought. keep on!

Sa akin hindi ko alam kong green talaga yong material ng concrete moulding o baka wala talagang mat. trellis off-scale, yong iba nasabi na. tambay ka lang dito sir sipag lang sa pagkalkal..

markuss5 wrote:needed adjustments:

saturation, slate texture, lighting on shaded area, glass material, roof tile scale.
nice start thought. keep on!

salamat sa pagdaan sir, makakatulong comment mo....

ARNEL_PRO wrote:Sa akin hindi ko alam kong green talaga yong material ng concrete moulding o baka wala talagang mat. trellis off-scale, yong iba nasabi na. tambay ka lang dito sir sipag lang sa pagkalkal..

haha... nakalimutan lagyan ng mat. sir....

Sir yong roof pa pala ano pong ginagawa ng ridge doon?

ARNEL_PRO wrote:Sir yong roof pa pala ano pong ginagawa ng ridge doon?

i copy ko sana ung model para may kapitbahay, pero di kinaya irender ng laptop ko... kaya ridge nalang...

update po....

if it were me, i would extend the terraces roof and place square post to make it look better and more stable. also have the park trelis rest on beams and reduce the sizes. dont worry that is just my opinion. your design is good as it is.

markuss5 wrote:if it were me, i would extend the terraces roof and place square post to make it look better and more stable. also have the park trelis rest on beams and reduce the sizes. dont worry that is just my opinion. your design is good as it is.

maybe that is lacking with me, i have no background in architectural design.... but i'm allured with designs and concepts like every here does. i will use max as a hobby not for any purpose, thank you for your comment sir, i will gain alot of knowledge for the comments..... Cheers CGPinoy community. btw thanks again sir for dropping by.