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Post by reeze Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:15 am

Render only. Design is not mine. Need comments po to improve render. Thanks Smile

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Post by archie.l Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:42 am

nice render... seems blurry to me,, agaw attention din yung BG,, more views pa
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Post by IAN02 Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:46 am

try to make your background a little bit darker..
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Post by maningdada Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:57 am

nice one bro', galing 2thumbsup
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Post by akoy Sat Oct 09, 2010 3:15 am

super liwanag ang bg
nawala yung material ng halaman sa harap
CA halata
more closer views
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Post by brodger Sat Oct 09, 2010 3:29 am

Galing nito ah..parang kuha sa low res cam,heheh! 3D ba lahat?ano PS dito bro? Clubhouse View Update 290602
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Post by krizaliehs07 Sat Oct 09, 2010 3:31 am

ang galing po sir 2thumbsup
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Post by archshade02 Sat Oct 09, 2010 4:02 am

very interesting ang structure galing sir
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Post by reeze Sat Oct 09, 2010 5:19 am

Thanks po. I'll try to re-adjust based on the comments said.

@brodger: 3d po lahat yan with some enhancing on PS. Smile
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Post by leslie1023 Sat Oct 09, 2010 5:54 am

galing nito..!!!! Clubhouse View Update 290602 Clubhouse View Update 290602
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Post by arki_lynx Sat Oct 09, 2010 6:12 am

nice render bagay sa design.. more view po closer din para makaiwas sa mga obstruction sayang kasi ganda ng design hindi po kita lahat...
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Post by bokkins Sat Oct 09, 2010 9:43 am

Maganda pagkagawa mo dito at pagkarender, composition lang ang medyo mali. Kasi dapat ang structure ang focus mo dito, hindi ang foreground. Better kung ganito mo na-crop.

Bago mo gawin ang isang render, dapat matukoy mo muna kung ano ba ang purpose ng gagawin mo? Landscaping ba ito o presentation ng isang structure? Dapat may emphasis sa compostion. Meron bida at simpleng supporting actors lang...

Dito sa image, mapapansin mo na solong solo ng building ang spotlight, kasi sya ang bida. Maari mo ng masabi na clubhouse nga...
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Post by mhom2x Sat Oct 09, 2010 12:01 pm

Tama ka sir Boks. pero in fairness maganda ang trabaho. sobra lang ata ang softlight nya ata . good job dong.
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Post by reeze Sat Oct 09, 2010 12:21 pm

bokkins wrote:Maganda pagkagawa mo dito at pagkarender, composition lang ang medyo mali. Kasi dapat ang structure ang focus mo dito, hindi ang foreground. Better kung ganito mo na-crop.

Bago mo gawin ang isang render, dapat matukoy mo muna kung ano ba ang purpose ng gagawin mo? Landscaping ba ito o presentation ng isang structure? Dapat may emphasis sa compostion. Meron bida at simpleng supporting actors lang...

Dito sa image, mapapansin mo na solong solo ng building ang spotlight, kasi sya ang bida. Maari mo ng masabi na clubhouse nga...
Clubhouse View Update B5crop

thanks a lot sir boks.. Your comment was very helpful.. yun pala talaga yun kulang ko. This is a great help for my future visualizations. I realy appreciate it.. dami ko pang kakaining bigas dito.. salamat po.. take note ko po yun sinabi nyo.. Smile
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Post by Jehan Sat Oct 09, 2010 12:44 pm

ganda po ng design, ok na rin yung pakarender sir

nasabi na rin yung mga dapat iadjust thumbsup
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Post by deosrock Sat Oct 09, 2010 4:36 pm

-nice work sir! ganda!
--adjust mo nalang according sa mga comment... Clubhouse View Update 808695
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Post by Valiant Sun Oct 10, 2010 12:32 am

astig ng design, landscape at render Clubhouse View Update 808695 take note sa sinabi ni bokkins Smile very helpful.
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Post by totalreal Sun Oct 10, 2010 3:14 am

very nice donge, great colorharmony.... take care

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