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Post by archshade02 Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:06 am

Share ko lang po mga mga master.autocadd 3dmax viray ps
comment are appreciated for improvement salamat po
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Post by bizkong Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:12 am

nice render brother, just check the scale of the builiding( ground (floor to floor height) or the pre modeled pips and cars! trabaho sa labas 2010 290602
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Post by rangalua Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:19 am

Nice render bro.

IMHO:
- Please check your scaling (Comparison: Door entrance & 3d people, Cars).
- Level: road, sidewalk & ground floor.
- There's something in the environment, I can't tell.

I like the design though.
Thanks for sharing bro.
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Post by archshade02 Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:21 am

bizkong wrote:nice render brother, just check the scale of the builiding( ground (floor to floor height) or the pre modeled pips and cars! trabaho sa labas 2010 290602
tnxs sir
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Post by cloud20 Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:42 am

Whats "viray"? "find living" I guess is really "fine living"...
This is a huge leap from your previous post. I agree with machogwapitoRangalua; nice design... Lighting looks good but can still be improved...
The second view wasn't necesarry, the first one would've sufficed. As papaRangalua mentioned there's something about the environment; which makes the second scene look like a scaled model, almost with the first scene too. Like the whole scene was enclosed inside something giving it an unnatural tinge... Rescale na lang yung peeps; they add to the scale model look too especially because these set of 3d people will really look like mannequins with the wrong kind of lighting that sharpens the scene... PM muku denan dkang tau.

Overall good work... How's your render times?...
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Post by archshade02 Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:51 am

rangalua wrote:Nice render bro.

IMHO:
- Please check your scaling (Comparison: Door entrance & 3d people, Cars).
- Level: road, sidewalk & ground floor.
- There's something in the environment, I can't tell.

I like the design though.
Thanks for sharing bro.
salamat po sa pagsilip at comment sir update ko po kapag may time na rush kasi he
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Post by archshade02 Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:53 am

cloud20 wrote:Whats "viray"? "find living" I guess is really "fine living"...
This is a huge leap from your previous post. I agree with machogwapitoRangalua; nice design... Lighting looks good but can still be improved...
The second view wasn't necesarry, the first one would've sufficed. As papaRangalua mentioned there's something about the environment; which makes the second scene look like a scaled model, almost with the first scene too. Like the whole scene was enclosed inside something giving it an unnatural tinge... Rescale na lang yung peeps; they add to the scale model look too especially because these set of 3d people will really look like mannequins with the wrong kind of lighting that sharpens the scene... PM muku denan dkang tau.

Overall good work... How's your render times?...
first off all sir tnxs for all comment for improvement even this job is rush,well i will update this job,about the rendering i realy tnxs again for your sharing the techenick of the rendering time.tnxs bos
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Post by brodger Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:12 am

Sharp but smooth in the eyes..tindi siguro rig mo sir!more pa po! trabaho sa labas 2010 290602
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Post by archshade02 Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:13 am

brodger wrote:Sharp but smooth in the eyes..tindi siguro rig mo sir!more pa po! trabaho sa labas 2010 290602
cg po rig?
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Post by archi_ram Sun Sep 19, 2010 12:53 pm

archshade02 wrote:
brodger wrote:Sharp but smooth in the eyes..tindi siguro rig mo sir!more pa po! trabaho sa labas 2010 290602
cg po rig?
trabaho sa labas 2010 Icon_scratch sir rig means your PC.....and vray not viray (first post same word)....pardon me but just leading you to straight path sir, sorry for o.t.....nice post anyway post more trabaho sa labas 2010 290323
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Post by bugoy-69 Sun Sep 19, 2010 11:06 pm

nice work bro.. trabaho sa labas 2010 290602
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Post by ARIST Sun Sep 19, 2010 11:42 pm

Choose a better topic title, what kind of building is this and how many storey? http://www.cgpinoy.org/forum-posting-rules-f1/choose-a-good-topic-or-thread-title-t1283.htm
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Post by archshade02 Mon Sep 20, 2010 12:52 am

ARIST wrote:Choose a better topic title, what kind of building is this and how many storey? [url=http://www.cgpinoy.org/forum-posting-rules-f1/choose-a-good-topic-or-thread-title-t1283.htm
http://www.cgpinoy.org/forum-posting-rules-f1/choose-a-good-topic-or-thread-title-t1283.htm[/quote[/url]]
salamat po sir next time kapag na update ko babaguhin ko na
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Post by archshade02 Mon Sep 20, 2010 12:53 am

archi_ram wrote:
archshade02 wrote:
brodger wrote:Sharp but smooth in the eyes..tindi siguro rig mo sir!more pa po! trabaho sa labas 2010 290602
cg po rig?
trabaho sa labas 2010 Icon_scratch sir rig means your PC.....and vray not viray (first post same word)....pardon me but just leading you to straight path sir, sorry for o.t.....nice post anyway post more trabaho sa labas 2010 290323
ok lang po sir at least maraming natutunan.salamat
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Post by archshade02 Mon Sep 20, 2010 12:53 am

bugoy-69 wrote:nice work bro.. trabaho sa labas 2010 290602
salamat sa pagdaan sir bugoy
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Post by 3dpjumong2007 Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:35 am

i would suggest to make another view like everyone said kung titingnan siya parang out of scale maybe because of the camera position ,just like lolo cloud said marami pa pedeng ma improve dito ..try also to kalikot light source mo ...tambay ka lang dito at laging makinig kay lolo cloud .. trabaho sa labas 2010 290602
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Post by dreffyves3d Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:52 am

nice visual, try to improve the lighting... trabaho sa labas 2010 576143
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Post by archshade02 Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:54 am

3dpjumong2007 wrote:i would suggest to make another view like everyone said kung titingnan siya parang out of scale maybe because of the camera position ,just like lolo cloud said marami pa pedeng ma improve dito ..try also to kalikot light source mo ...tambay ka lang dito at laging makinig kay lolo cloud .. trabaho sa labas 2010 290602
oki salamat sir well ill try to update this project
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Post by archshade02 Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:55 am

dreffyves3d wrote:nice visual, try to improve the lighting... trabaho sa labas 2010 576143
tnxs bro.
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