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msta mga cg people...post po ulit,,dorm po ito,hnd po sa akn ung design.....mukhang uulan po yata,mgadala po kau ng mag payong ha,,cge na po,tirahin nyo na habang hnd pa pumapatak ang ulan..hehhe...slamat po..

Hi there!
I think naging pantay ang bounces ng G.I. overall kaya medyo nawalan ng drama yung scene lighting. Please give me infos sa settings of what this scene is made up, para malaman ko yung pwede ko pang i-suggest. But for the meantime, camera is not right, too many cars and add more landscaping.

ronski_g wrote:Hi there!
I think naging pantay ang bounces ng G.I. overall kaya medyo nawalan ng drama yung scene lighting. Please give me infos sa settings of what this scene is made up, para malaman ko yung pwede ko pang i-suggest. But for the meantime, camera is not right, too many cars and add more landscaping.

sa likod po nanggagaling ung lyts sir,,,,,ok po sir.noted po lahat...tnx

bro pakoment bago umulan, konting bump pa en displace sa mga bricks, en ung mga cars masyado makinang agaw pansin sila bro ,pero render is good design no komment hnd naman syo design eh!hehe, lighting ok na rin sir pero pde mopa tweak para looks real en natural!un lang sir una nko baka abutan ako ng ulan heheh!

ganda... konting tweaks lang cguro.. this nice design...dormitory talga datin..

niwde wrote:bro pakoment bago umulan, konting bump pa en displace sa mga bricks, en ung mga cars masyado makinang agaw pansin sila bro ,pero render is good design no komment hnd naman syo design eh!hehe, lighting ok na rin sir pero pde mopa tweak para looks real en natural!un lang sir una nko baka abutan ako ng ulan heheh!

noted po lahat..tnx

Butz_Arki wrote:ganda... konting tweaks lang cguro.. this nice design...dormitory talga datin..

salamat master...

sir... hmmm... sa design.. ok lang po...

nwei, sir on this camera view, maybe u should consider the roof eaves and the ceiling... more details siguro... konting vents lang po ok na sir... and yup2x ung car shaders nyo po medyo makinang lang maxado... lalo na ung red... ung road din sir... medyo makintab lang... a coconut tree on the scene... parang di po ata swak sir.. sa aking opinion lang po namn...

un lang po sir... uulan na ata eh... nice project...

galing nito sir jarul nice render & design,,, some comments lng about d camera view masyado yata naview ung sidewalk,,, n ung mat ng trees parang plastik ung kulay i think mas maganda medyo dark, tiling of bricks halata pa n grass displacement medyo kulang,,, but overall ok na ok aprub sa akin toh bro!!! keep posting!!!

its fine with me, play lang more on ceiling, wall and cornice material...
keep posting...

oks na oks sir linis ng paligid post more

slamt po..noted po lahat

tnx masters

Nice render sir jarul.I know gusto mong palabasin na mood e medyo paulan but i think mas ok kung may mag ca cast na shadow sa building.The composition is good na cguro atras mo lng ng konti yung car na nasa foreground and tama add ka pa konting landscape..By the way good job here bro..Keep it up and keep posting..

ARCHITHEKTHURA wrote:Nice render sir jarul.I know gusto mong palabasin na mood e medyo paulan but i think mas ok kung may mag ca cast na shadow sa building.The composition is good na cguro atras mo lng ng konti yung car na nasa foreground and tama add ka pa konting landscape..By the way good job here bro..Keep it up and keep posting..

salamat po master..noted po lhat,,tnx

Again bro, cars are too much. nawala na ang dorm.. kuha mo na ang rendering. now it's time to focus on your composition. cars are great, but that's not the point ika nga. kaya mo yan, ang laki ng potential ng mga gawa mo. good luck bro.