villa in jeddah (corniche)

Good day. It is my first time to post an exterior work, done in AutoCAD/3dsmax/vray/ps. Villa located somewhere in Jeddah (corniche). A small residential project (sideline). unfortunately, hinde ko nakuha yong gusto kong outcome ng rendering, kaya i need your comments and suggestions guys. GOD Bless.











update ko lang guys, its final. hope you like it.

IMHO ang sakit sa mata ng BG ng 2nd and 4th image sobrang orange which looks fake talaga...

ganda ng model kaso hanapan mo lang ng magandang angle ng camera sir...

arki_vhin wrote:IMHO ang sakit sa mata ng BG ng 2nd and 4th image sobrang orange which looks fake talaga...

ganda ng model kaso hanapan mo lang ng magandang angle ng camera sir...

noted sir. update ko na lng yong images. practice ko actually yong 2nd and 4th images for night scene . thanks bro

sakit tlga sa mata..palitan muna lang ng dark bluiss ang red BG mo..parang me nasusunog na kapitbahay.yung camera level aiayus mo na lang ulit.good modelling skills.pwede bang maarbor ang 3d model nito? jord1284@yahoo.com.ph

-work on your lighting as well, the day scene looks kinda dark.
-look for a better camera angle.

thanks for all your comments guys. update ko na rin. kayo na bahala.

What second and fourth image where?...

cloud20 wrote:What second and fourth image where?...

Sir they are pertaining to my old link kaso na delete ko na yong 2nd and 4th images, but then repost ko ulit to compare with my updated day and night scene. Thanks