Rural bank of Rosario

good day fellow Filipinos,, sharing again my latest render and my 4th post here, which really need some minor and major major comment . bale matagal na itong project na ito kaso puro revision nangyayari,, ito yung final revision,, sana approve na ng client,, feel free to leave comments and suggestions,,,
usual workflow, autocad 2009 for modelling, 3dmax 2009+vray for rendering and photoshop for brightness and contrast


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wow! i like the lady!

- firewall ba talaga ang dalawang sides? ilayo mo ng konti ang camera pakita mo sky and road
- better remove the car masyado silang nakafocus
- curtains hindi rin bagay
- may edge ang curve roof mo, polycarbonate ba un? hindi ba masyado makapal ata?
- remove the lens flare
- too reflective ang stainless material
- change the material of the firewall
- malakas ang light ng signage sa may atm machine
- need some attention on the floor material (where the lady stands)
- agaw pansin ang chick

- no need for the girl architectural focus tayo
- color combination po
- also the car natatakpan na yung harapan
- adjust the camera yung pont of view nya.
- canopy masyadong makapal and may kanto yung curve try mo mag filelink ka pag nag insert sa max para yung mga rounded object maging smooth surface sya.

thanks sa comment,, update ko po as soon as possible... noted po lahat

ATM booth pero walang makitang ATM machine

Woots29 wrote:ATM booth pero walang makitang ATM machine

bale nasa loob po sir ung atm machine,, door lang po ung nakikita safront ng building

ah reflection ba ng wall yun? o wood talaga? sana see-thru

reflection po sir ng wall... kaya di ko na po linagyan,, hehehe update ko nalang pag may time po sir

hehe ok. mataas masyado reflection. cge sir, wait namin update.

btw, nice colors.

Woots29 wrote:hehe ok. mataas masyado reflection. cge sir, wait namin update.

btw, nice colors.

t.y