updated pool

Hi mga ka cgpepz! update ko lang po etong gnawa ko last week.. day scene naman po ngayon....paki c&c nalang po
process sketchup+vrfsu+ps

Day Scene


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andyan na ang lighting - almost

some points:
-improve your composition. right now kasi, some elements looks smaller than they seem to be.
- improve camera angle
-work on your textures
-work on your background elements

Parang ang wine ang focus dito, hindi ang pool.

This is a presentation fail. You need to rethink kung alin nga ba ang subject mo dito.

Thanks po mga sirs.. noted po yan...