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Post by gabrielbucad Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:18 am

hi sa lahat. unang try ko po ito gumawa ng 3d. nahirapan ako, pero enjoy naman. pero hindi ko alam kung pasado na 'to. pero try lang po. cnc's are highly appriciated para sa ikabubuti at ikagaganda ng mga works ko, salamat Very Happy .

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Post by cloud20 Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:47 pm

This one shows promise. If this is your first try you're on the right track.
---Work on your grass; the displacement is a bit awry right now...
---Learn UVW mapping; your road si really stretched out right now...
---Try to balance your lighting to avoid burn-outs...
---Some flora sa sides siguro...

---Nice design, I actually like the framing of the scene, and the Cooper is just right; not your basic Lambo but equal in stature...

I'll be keeping an eye on this one... Good work Gabriel...
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Post by brodger Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:52 pm

Tindi ng first try mo bro! konting tweak na lang to ayos na ayos na! makitira ka na rin dito malayo mararating mo! Goodluck po! thumbsup
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Post by bokkins Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:56 pm

Very nice first try. You've got it in the sense na kitang kita na ang personal touch mo sa design and composition.

What you need now is a good vray setup. Try these suggestions.
1. Render in small output muna. 600x800 will do, para din mas mabilis
2. Use catmull rom of mitchel sa anti-aliasing
3. Lower the intensity of the sun just a little bit to avoid the washout/burn on the structure ang greens.

Good Luck! We want to see your progress so please update us once in a while. Welcome to CGP! thumbsup
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Post by JefsM82 Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:50 pm

Sir Maganda po ang Background at Foreground niyo, meron siyang continuity...at ang angle ng camera para sa akin tamang-tama...siguro po gaya ng sabi ng mga naunang comments setup nalang sa rendering (vray).

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Post by gabrielbucad Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:43 am

cloud20 wrote:This one shows promise. If this is your first try you're on the right track.
---Work on your grass; the displacement is a bit awry right now...
---Learn UVW mapping; your road si really stretched out right now...
---Try to balance your lighting to avoid burn-outs...
---Some flora sa sides siguro...

---Nice design, I actually like the framing of the scene, and the Cooper is just right; not your basic Lambo but equal in stature...

I'll be keeping an eye on this one... Good work Gabriel...

sir cloud, thank you po sa pagdaan. i'll try to improve this one. sana masilip nyo po ulit kapag naayos ko na. Very Happy

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Post by gabrielbucad Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:46 am

brodger wrote:Tindi ng first try mo bro! konting tweak na lang to ayos na ayos na! makitira ka na rin dito malayo mararating mo! Goodluck po! thumbsup

salamat po sa napaka inspiring at welcoming words nyo sir. i hope i would make good friends with you and with the other members. Very Happy

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Post by gabrielbucad Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:50 am

bokkins wrote:Very nice first try. You've got it in the sense na kitang kita na ang personal touch mo sa design and composition.

What you need now is a good vray setup. Try these suggestions.
1. Render in small output muna. 600x800 will do, para din mas mabilis
2. Use catmull rom of mitchel sa anti-aliasing
3. Lower the intensity of the sun just a little bit to avoid the washout/burn on the structure ang greens.

Good Luck! We want to see your progress so please update us once in a while. Welcome to CGP! thumbsup

thank you po sa pagdaan sir bokkins. try ko po tong sinabi nyo sir. pero ang problema ko e paano iimprove ung quality nang image. kasi pixelated talaga ung image. Very Happy , thank you

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Post by gabrielbucad Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:53 am

maalala ko lang pu pala. maraming salamat sa kaibigan ko na si jenik na walang sawang nagturo sakin dito. peace man thank you nik.

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