doh reg02 supporting structures

aesonck wrote:culture laboratory
1.trellace aren't proportion, please refer to the eaves overhang, its to large then rescale the trellace.
2.your hip is to big , addjust the slope.
3.railings cost to much, use smaller diameter for stainless ralings
4.Front View, check the height of lady compare to man.
5. Your Background entourage is nice

aesonck wrote:culture laboratory
1.trellace aren't proportion, please refer to the eaves overhang, its to large then rescale the trellace.
2.your hip is to big , addjust the slope.
3.railings cost to much, use smaller diameter for stainless ralings
4.Front View, check the height of lady compare to man.
5. Your Background entourage is nice

ARIST wrote:

aesonck wrote:culture laboratory
1.trellace aren't proportion, please refer to the eaves overhang, its to large then rescale the trellace.
2.your hip is to big , addjust the slope.
3.railings cost to much, use smaller diameter for stainless ralings
4.Front View, check the height of lady compare to man.
5. Your Background entourage is nice

Lakay, allow me to comment based from sir aesonck's comment.
1. Baka trellis sir, parang napalaki ata lakay.
2. For me, ok lang naman ang hip roof mo lakay,parang kulang lang sa glossiness yung roof mismo.
3. Parang malaki nga yung pinaka top rail.
4. Peoples height ok lang naman for me based from the structure.
5. Hindi lang background for me, over all.


Nice one lakay. More projects pa.

akoy wrote:yahoo linabas na hehehe galing ayoko lang yung mga tao sir pang malayuan lang talaga siya ok! libre naman kayo ni sir arist hehehe

jarul wrote:1st image
- grass is too dark
- image is too sharp
- sana uniform yung railing sa ramp & sa terrace
- ibahin mo siguro ang location ng sun,hanapin mo pa yung mas maganda play ng shadows
- yepz.yung bg nga.

2nd image
- harsh shadow, yung nagcast sa ground.
- minimize nyo po yung pag gamit ng peeps.lalo na kung malapitan.mukhang mga zombie
- something wrong w/ the gutter.not sure.sa model ata
- yung sa AO .adjust mo pa..yung smooth..as of now parang linya cya tingnan.

thank you very much master!!!! comments noted po!
-yung grass pala, auto grass kasi yan, first time using it... i'll try to explore more..