(noon & sunset) 5th Post in CGP

mga sir share ko lang po practice scenes ko... I am trying to produce noon time scene and sunset scene.. Hindi ko po sure kung nag-come-up nga ba sa ganung set-up yung scene ko.. Need your c/c's mga master...
Done in 3d max 2009 vray 1.5 sp4....

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ito pa mga master isama ko na rin po another sunset scene practice...



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more power to cgpinoy....

ganda sir hehehe like the first image IMHO lang yung side walk po medyo matalas,sk yung window ng toilet ata yun s left side diko alam oh malabo lang mata ko pero lupit mo na sir master kana rin

krizaliehs07 wrote:ganda sir hehehe like the first image IMHO lang yung side walk po medyo matalas,sk yung window ng toilet ata yun s left side diko alam oh malabo lang mata ko pero lupit mo na sir master kana rin

thanks sir sa pagsilip.. sa reflection yta yung about dun sa window sir.. forgot to chamfer the edges masyadong atat magpost hehehe... marami pa tayong kakaining bigas sir hehehe..

As requested po here goes...

First image: Try to dial down your second bounces, theres a bit of color bleed evident on the eave areas especially where the sunlight hits... The T&B window invades the brown trimming at the leftmost area... Kerb needs to be chamfered a bit... Double stripes on the road?... Blinds for the interior to negate the "vacant" look... Nice color, good looking roof, nice shot... Nice lighting... Good job, really..

Second image: Very well done... Some lights inside would make the scene really jump out; theres a tutorial hereabouts try to look for it... Gutter burns, dial up either your hsphs or your lightsource subdivs...

Third image: looks good, kulang ng kaunting "oomphh" medyo bland I think sa lighting din yan... Too reflective glass... More work on the pool model try to find some references...

Keep at it...
For some reason kanina ko pa pinost tong reply pero di ata pumasok sorry kung na late...

cloud20 wrote:As requested po here goes...

First image: Try to dial down your second bounces, theres a bit of color bleed evident on the eave areas especially where the sunlight hits... The T&B window invades the brown trimming at the leftmost area... Kerb needs to be chamfered a bit... Double stripes on the road?... Blinds for the interior to negate the "vacant" look... Nice color, good looking roof, nice shot... Nice lighting... Good job, really..

Second image: Very well done... Some lights inside would make the scene really jump out; theres a tutorial hereabouts try to look for it... Gutter burns, dial up either your hsphs or your lightsource subdivs...

Third image: looks good, kulang ng kaunting "oomphh" medyo bland I think sa lighting din yan... Too reflective glass... More work on the pool model try to find some references...

Keep at it...
For some reason kanina ko pa pinost tong reply pero di ata pumasok sorry kung na late...

maraming salamat master cloud... i will try to incorporate all your suggestions kapag nag update ako..

ayos sir ganda lightings nyo, nice render

allnem wrote:ayos sir ganda lightings nyo, nice render

maraming salamat sa pagdaan sir..