Colina residence interior (dining area)

halu mga masters share q lang po tong gnawa kong interior...... render lang po sakin... di pa po final ang mga finishes nito update ko nalang po pag natapos na. im using sketchup+vrfsu tpos konting ps...c&c are welcome for my improvement.

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Bro proportion lang masyado mataas yung table mu sa chair at wood material malaki yung grain niya.
repetition sa plants sa right side kung pwede e rearrange lang.
keep practicing bro,at sa huli ,master kana

ok po edit q lang po to thanks po sa pag-daan

nice start sir. comments lang po

-medyo nasobrahan lang po ang reflection ng glass sa likod
-ano po setting gamit sir? medyo noisy kasi. imo lang.
-ang mapping po sa wood sa chairs , need adjustment, dagdag bump siguro.

-pero nice render sir. keep it up!

tile grove masyadong malaki sir, avoid using wooden furniture outside sayang naman masira lang yan... more practice and tambay ka lang dito dami tutulung sa iyo!

nice jul....its a good start....you improve already

Nice render sir. nasabi na mga comments. keep it up!

lighting needs improvement..

Light sources look ok; although somewhat anliwanag ng ceiling.. in fact, mas maliwanag pa siya kaysa sahig.. kind of unnatural.

Your objects, as they mentioned, are too simple.. your chairs are made up of rectangles, with very little curves.. same sa cushion; ung table stand, masyadong sharp ung edges.. try doing chamfers and more complex designs. Granted, dumadating yun through experience and study so this is actually a good start.

finally, sabi ni lowellflores about the grain nung wood.. kuha ka ng mas high-resolution na wood texture map.. plus add bump/spec map sa wood.

Overall good render; the environment shows your inexperience though.

thanks po sa mga comments...anyways since wip pa po to marami pa tong adjusments maybe mabago pa ang design nito after meeting the owner kung anu gustong nyang mangyari sa interior. kasi piagaya lang nya yung house nyasa U.S.

actually d pa kmi nag'focus sa furnitures nya more on articulations pa lang sa interior..