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Post by abed Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:10 pm

post ko lang po dito..maling thread yung nauna..


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Post by jhames joe albert infante Thu Jul 22, 2010 8:58 pm

welcome to the forum .. looks good, sana lang di naputol, and try to add more elements.. and ofcourse, Contrastkeep it up thumbsup
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Post by zir0grafix Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:28 am

Its a good start brother.

Few tips:

*rule of thirds, or try to balance the foreground, the main element and the background. In this case napasobra yung foreground mo. Check also your background horizon line, it looks like the house is at the edge of a cliff.

*entourage - try to put some more vegetations/greens. It does magic almost all the time. Try to study and understand your shadow and highlights para pag naglagay ka ng mga entourage mo sa photoshop e mag-blend sya sa scene, look at the man in your image, hindi sya tugma sa scene.

*Add more details to your model para hindi ito magmukhang kahon o matigas. look at your eaves.

*Study texturing, bumps and displacement.

*design - parang sobrang taas nung second floor height, or masyado lang mababa yung window. study mo pa yung termination nung stone wall mo at painted wall.


Dont take it against you, but take these as a challenge bro. Lahat naman dumaan sa ganito.

Welcome and happy rendering!


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Post by jarul Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:41 am

zir0grafix wrote:Its a good start brother.

Few tips:

*rule of thirds, or try to balance the foreground, the main element and the background. In this case napasobra yung foreground mo. Check also your background horizon line, it looks like the house is at the edge of a cliff.

*entourage - try to put some more vegetations/greens. It does magic almost all the time. Try to study and understand your shadow and highlights para pag naglagay ka ng mga entourage mo sa photoshop e mag-blend sya sa scene, look at the man in your image, hindi sya tugma sa scene.

*Add more details to your model para hindi ito magmukhang kahon o matigas. look at your eaves.

*Study texturing, bumps and displacement.

*design - parang sobrang taas nung second floor height, or masyado lang mababa yung window. study mo pa yung termination nung stone wall mo at painted wall.


Dont take it against you, but take these as a challenge bro. Lahat naman dumaan sa ganito.

Welcome and happy rendering!



ayun oh..

welcome nalang po muna kita... thumbsup
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Post by kieko Fri Jul 23, 2010 8:44 am

welcome sa CGP bro..
nice first post..
tambay ka lang lagi dito
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Post by osibalasi Fri Jul 23, 2010 8:50 am

welcome sir
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Post by alwin Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:32 pm

mas okay siguro kung meron kang guide na view serve as your reference in texturing para mababawasan na yung mga issues kasi medyo marami!
anyways welcome po sir at follow ka nalang sa commens sa previous post nito! good luck!
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Post by abed Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:50 am

maraming salamat po sa mga comments..sb nga ni zirO..ill take your comments as a challenge..heplfull talaga dito..lalo na sa tutorials..

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