condo interior

mga master practice lang po ng interior using standard cam at lighting pati dof pro

nothing special just want to share hope you can help me improve this

done in max2009 and photoshop

many thanks

Una na po ako sir!
If your doing an interior scene i suggest you should focus more on the interior design not the accessories po. Kindly post another view emphasizing the interiors. That's all! Waiting for your new post! Thank you!

anmarj1258 wrote:Una na po ako sir!
If your doing an interior scene i suggest you should focus more on the interior design not the accessories po. Kindly post another view emphasizing the interiors. That's all! Waiting for your new post! Thank you!

thanks. . it was not my design pala . . pinagawa lang sakin sinunod ko lang heeh. . hirap magdagdag baka paulit
mejo pinagpractisan ko lang and mejo mabilisan ito

anyway thanks

-a bit dark for me.
-cam angles are not interesting IMHO.
-better selection of evermotion models
-the scene is not convincing, start with your composition if it's not your design.

yaug_03 wrote:-a bit dark for me.
-cam angles are not interesting IMHO.
-better selection of evermotion models
-the scene is not convincing, start with your composition if it's not your design.

thanks sir noted
i'll post better soon

Your previous interiors on the white house completely eclipse this set... Like sir Yaug mentions, compo is the key; that will inevitably include the angles... Some floating tableware, a bit more work sa textured glass natin... DOF lacks the requisite oomphh... but I like the bold colors... Rush ito no sir?
As ever, practice hard...

cloud20 wrote:Your previous interiors on the white house completely eclipse this set... Like sir Yaug mentions, compo is the key; that will inevitably include the angles... Some floating tableware, a bit more work sa textured glass natin... DOF lacks the requisite oomphh... but I like the bold colors... Rush ito no sir?
As ever, practice hard...

yup rush po and mejo nagadjust ako from vray cam to standard medyo may mga tinest lang ako
mejo hilaw pa pinost ko na atat eh pero ok lang i got some comments to note to my next work
thanks sir. . . bawi me talaga next post ko mejo nachallenge ako eheh. . dapat di ko pinost to ehehhe
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

very nice sir

simple and clean design,,keep posting bro

nasabi na nila ang comments,,, pero ayos na rin ito bro,,, keep it up,,,

ayos sir..konting laro pa sa lights para gumanda cast ng shadows at shades...dami ata nating tabing guhit jan ha? post more!

yaug_03 wrote:-a bit dark for me.
-cam angles are not interesting IMHO.
-better selection of evermotion models
-the scene is not convincing, start with your composition if it's not your design.

tama si yaug sa comment nya bro, keep it up

^^ same comments here...kahit na pina render its sometimes wise also to suggest some ideas like the one in the fireplace blank wall and the fireplace missing a small slab etc..even the furniture were not adept to the size of the rooms...alam ko update mo pa ito...

boss moldings po siguro sa ceiling at baseboard sa floorings, suggest ko lang baka makatulong, ayos yan ganda. . .

parang lumutang ang accessories mo sa last image, parang naiba ang render mo yata? ewan ko lang...yong frosted glass mo halata sya...parang lahat nakalutang except 1st image...update mo sana base sa comment.

-a bit dark
-some furniture and accessories are not in sync with the scene
-you can experiment with vray new built in AO feature to avoid areas where the elements give off an illusion that they are floating.

Nice one dre. Comment ako bukas. Liit kasi sa iphone

Your 2nd and last image are not consistent with each other bro, nagbago bigla wall color under the book shelf. Also, it would be better if you did not focus on the accessories. But very nice for a practice render. keep it up sir!

gusto ko ang design pero mas mapapaganda pa yan kapag nasundan na ang advice ni anmarj1258 nice render

some pointers lang sir

1. overall - kulang ang composition ng renders. first image ok na sana but the angled view looks off (vertical line rule, camera correction). the 2nd image doesnt show much, just leading the eyes to that blank sheet above the fireplace. the 3rd image, nice use of DOF but there is no interesting focus.

if you really want to practice i suggest modelling your own furniture. a simple scene with only 2 or 3 but carefully chosen furniture pieces will make a stronger impact than relying heavily on preset models.

hope this helps.

ot: pakunat/jonathan - mag ipad ka na kasi :p

thanks mga master noted po mga comments!

i will work on my next post to improve promise!