two storey residential

hello mga cge pipz... daan lng po ako, matagal na din d ako nka post ko... post lng po nang update render
3dsmax+ps... cc are very much welcome.

ok design nyo sir.. bump lang po siguro dun sa brick. then ive noticed yung sa mga edges nung bahay. then ung sa baba nung gable roof. panu po maintenance nun since ngkagutter siya? yun lng po sa akin sir the rest sa mga master's na po

Try to optimize your image, matagal mag open.
Here's my comment, isa-isahin lang natin sir aces.
-work pa sa roof and grass
-double garage ba ito sir? parang maiksi.
-ramp, matirik masyado.
-add na rin exterior lighting fixture.
-sumobra rin/naputol yung side moulding(beam level) sa taas ng main door.
-road map/material na rin sir, baka may mas maganda pa dyan.
-observe na rin ang setback lalo na sa harap. Para kasing 1 meter lang or nakasagad na ata.
Minadali mo yata ito sir, parang basta naglagay-lagay ka na lang ng material. Imho ko lang naman. Abangan ko na lang ang isa pang update nito.
Pasensiya sir, naparami ata ng comment.
Lighting and rendering, ayos!

add kolang po. glass masyadong reflective. parang mirror napo kasi pero yung window sa garage para naman walang reflection. add contrast narin po ng kauti.

To add to sir Arist; lighting & rendering plus modelling skills good. Everything else goes down from there...

I don't usually comment on the design but this piece warrants it...
---looks like a showcase for windowtypes; modern, arced, semi arced, transomed, awning, bay, casement, fixed...
---baywindows don't look good like that; abutted by a higher roof rather abruptly... would look better free standing
---why use two materials for the eaves?
---the carport ramp leads me to wonder if you're an architect / architecture student?...
---i our side of the town we'd be calling this "chopsuey"...

hoping for an update...

ganda po sir lalo na lighting, post po kayo ng setting pati lighting at rendering

sa master na nag comment... heres my reply tama po kau sir minadali lng po talaga ito, rush kung baga, ang color combination nyan ay owner po ung may gusto and 2.6x6.8 lng po ang sukat nang area... ung ramp masadon matirik i know po d lng kc namalayan.. anyway tnx sa pag comment..

nice design master... galing... todo kau ngaun ah...

-i like the rendering bro.
-mukhang nakaangat lang yung house kita yung grass mo sa left side
-bawasan mo lang siguro mga elements ng design. IMHO llang po.
-keep it up bro.
-God bless!

nice work....! agree with comments above...! add ko lang on BG... mejo madilim...! nde sila jive ng environment mo.... un lang post more sir...!