2 storey modern duplex (1st post)

pinarender lang po 1st po mga master.....paki C&C na lang po mga Masters beginner lang po.
work flow max & vray

nice....comment lang ako sa foreground car mo sir, prang nkalutang eh ..kulang pa sa ambient/contact shadows because you are using ang exterior lighting. remember sir, it's not only the sun gives you the light information but also the sky as well..try use an ambient occulusion pass from mental ray shader or vray dirt shader, if you are well-versed in vray render engine..

add po, maybe you can took some tip or critic from sir marcelinoiii. he knows more about mental ray than i do..

ganda po sir, @ taga_probins sir pano po gawin yung mabient occulusion? nasa tutorials ba yan

taga_probins wrote:nice....comment lang ako sa foreground car mo sir, prang nkalutang eh ..kulang pa sa ambient/contact shadows because you are using ang exterior lighting. remember sir, it's not only the sun gives you the light information but also the sky as well..try use an ambient occulusion pass from mental ray shader or vray dirt shader, if you are well-versed in vray render engine..

add po, maybe you can took some tip or critic from sir marcelinoiii. he knows more about mental ray than i do..

tnx po master

roycristobal wrote:ganda po sir, @ taga_probins sir pano po gawin yung mabient occulusion? nasa tutorials ba yan

eto sir, check this link, hope this might be help you...http://www.everflow.com/support/tutorials/AO/Everflow_AmbientOcclusion1.html

Vray po ba o mental ray sir?
The raw plywood door doesn't help. If you're going for modern chic you could at least paint it.
Work on your grass displacement. If you can't hack it go with 3d grass I know kaya ng rig mo yan.
Some refracted glass would be nice too...

Everything else okay naman eh..

nagmukhang malaki yung car try ka add nang reflection sa mga window
nice start

add kolang po.... walang pong doorknob. a simple mesh as curtain sa upper windows/doors will make the difference. polycarbonate po ba yung canopy sa carport? refract nyo po.the potential is there. sundin lang po advice ng mga masters natin dito at siguradong may mararating po kayo. good start cabalen. visit lang lagi dito at im sure marami kang matututunan.

nice design and render sir

tnx po mga master,,sa susunud na lang na render po

nice one bro... post more.

nice start! post more! mabuhay ang CGP!

maganda naman in terms of rendering, kaya lang may mga kulang pa
na kunti. like door knob, shrubs sa harapan (optional), yung door
kulang sa detail, parang plain lang (better if modelled).
lack of depthness on the corners, needs an ambient occlusion (needs
high specs of computer) you searc in tuts section!
anyways in my opinion lang naman! keep on practice & study post processing
softwares as for the final visualisation! good luck!

agree ako sa sinabi ni sir alwin....

better complete mo muna ang subject before the entourages..

but the ambiance is good for me