Resident's Swimming Pool (updated)

hi sa lahat ng cgpinoy members, its been a long time since i posted my works, share ko lang po ang latest work ko practice lang medyo natagalan ako sa pagrender ang bigat kasi, using core2duo laptop, 3d in autocad, render by max vray, and finish it in photoshop. i already posted this using autocad render here's the link, http://www.cgpinoy.org/photoshop-tutorials-f49/adding-water-features-in-photoshop-t9546.htm#190909, thanks to sir ronel for the tutorial on water effect, and now i try it to render on max vray hope you like it, comments and suggestions are welcome, help me also with the caustic i tried it but i think i failed, nagcrash render ko ehe.

Updated DOF (my first ever dof) it took me 9 long years este 9 hrs


Updated Pool View



dof in photoshop


2nd view


3rd view


night scene

nice scene...gawa ng water kaya mabigat ang render mo.

oo nga sa water nga salamat bro

sir.. ang galing nito.. nice sir..

ayos sir.. like the 1st image! bigat nga i-render nito..

nice images bro..
galing..

Water looks like a big bulk of ice dude. pwede ka nang mag ice skate eh...lalo sa second image.

try mo pang i-adjust yung refraction nya dude....

ryle88 wrote:sir.. ang galing nito.. nice sir..

berto24 wrote:ayos sir.. like the 1st image! bigat nga i-render nito..

kieko wrote:nice images bro..
galing..

salamat mga bro

torvicz wrote:Water looks like a big bulk of ice dude. pwede ka nang mag ice skate eh...lalo sa second image.

try mo pang i-adjust yung refraction nya dude....

oo nga hindi ko makuha yung water na gusto ko nakatodo na refraction, nilagyan ko na rin ng opacity

did you use archshaders here? somehow the subdivision settings on those shaders are quite large. I would suggest to just bring down the subdivisions to 8, or maximum of 12, if you are not going for a close-up views...

arkiedmund wrote:did you use archshaders here? somehow the subdivision settings on those shaders are quite large. I would suggest to just bring down the subdivisions to 8, or maximum of 12, if you are not going for a close-up views...

yup,i already check them i put them in 8, thanks for the info sir

Great work sir! keep inspiring us and share more Sir!

brodger wrote:Great work sir! keep inspiring us and share more Sir!

Thanks bro goodluck sa settings

sir, nice render! would just like to comment on the blurring with PS, I also do it, but you need to try to be more accurate.
Try to use the big size brush around without touching the near objects yet, after that reduce brush size and pressure then do the nearer objects next, as much as possible try to blur per object say for instance blur the plants first and the seats alone comes next... it's like doing them by layer this will make it more convincing and we are giving the depth to it as well...

marcelinoiii wrote:sir, nice render! would just like to comment on the blurring with PS, I also do it, but you need to try to be more accurate.
Try to use the big size brush around without touching the near objects yet, after that reduce brush size and pressure then do the nearer objects next, as much as possible try to blur per object say for instance blur the plants first and the seats alone comes next... it's like doing them by layer this will make it more convincing and we are giving the depth to it as well...

Wow, thanks for the tips sir i will try to do that at home

sure sir... glad to help!

another thing sir, try to copy the image and paste it on top of the original, then start bluring the copy image, after blurringg, adjust opacity of the copy until your satisfied with the merging of the blurred image with the original, erasing with soft brush some parts of the blurred copy would help too. to show preferred original image's foreground on top..

hope you don't mind sir, share ko na din sample for you:

marcelinoiii wrote:sure sir... glad to help!

another thing sir, try to copy the image and paste it on top of the original, then start bluring the copy image, after blurringg, adjust opacity of the copy until your satisfied with the merging of the blurred image with the original, erasing with soft brush some parts of the blurred copy would help too. to show preferred original image's foreground on top..

hope you don't mind sir, share ko na din sample for you:

of course i don't mind sir i really appreciate it, this will be a good help, thanks again bro

galing nito Rio, sakin adjust mo rin yung refraction para maging realistic ung water. Anyway this is minor only, nice practice and good composition anyway!

penzlake21 wrote:galing nito Rio, sakin adjust mo rin yung refraction para maging realistic ung water. Anyway this is minor only, nice practice and good composition anyway!

oo nga bro medyo nahirapan ako sa tubig ang bigat pa, salamat sa tips

sir quick bumanat ka na naman ah,,ayos to bro,niceone(^_^)

one9dew wrote:sir quick bumanat ka na naman ah,,ayos to bro,niceone(^_^)

thanks one9dew,musta na render natin? i attached the updated pala

updated views added comments & suggestion are welcome po para umasenso

Bro magaling pagkabanat mo dito....sa akin bro DOF lng malabo mga background, magpalabas ka ng zdepth sa max tapos iphotoshop mo nlang. masyado matagal yung 9 hour. lighting bro ayos na ayos.

comgrapart wrote:Bro magaling pagkabanat mo dito....sa akin bro DOF lng malabo mga background, magpalabas ka ng zdepth sa max tapos iphotoshop mo nlang. masyado matagal yung 9 hour. lighting bro ayos na ayos.

salamat bro, oo ang tagal ng 9 hours nakatulog na nga ako, anyway next on the list is z-depth ehe

Hi po! adjust lang po yung refraction the pool looks like its a runing water or may current sya....if you could find a diffrent mapping din would be good. Plus, sa lighting adjust mo pa sya....somethings missing po. heeheh! Yun lang po, overall output is nice! More please!