Newbie: Residential Exterior

Hi Good afternoon to all, newbie lang po. open for c & c about this work of mine. Thank you

Done in 3dmax 2009 + vray

ganda naman po nito sir,hirap po mag comment appriciate nlang po kaya ko ibigay baka po masilip po ako ng ibang mga master hehehe, ganda tlaga sir neto

krizaliehs07 wrote:ganda naman po nito sir,hirap po mag comment appriciate nlang po kaya ko ibigay baka po masilip po ako ng ibang mga master hehehe, ganda tlaga sir neto

it's OK to comment sir, kaya nga po sabe ng TS na open for C&C....kahit pa po newbie lang tayo

for the TS, nice rendering sir! you can also look for other sky to fit your background...

and sa shadows boss, nalilito lang ako, parang ang dami ng light sources, (look at the foreground tree shadow, shadow on the left? and in the carport?)

and for the glass shaders, more work pa sir, kahit ako hirap din dyan... welcome sir sa CGP,where amazing happens!

by the way, sa first 5 post po yata to dapat sir?

pa add ako, sidewalk edge, matulis. i-trim or gawing curve, pa improve pa yung roof saka parang na stretched horizontally yung foreground tree.imho lang.
ok po yung lighting sir, welcome and keep on posting..

wow ang gagaling nyo talaga

the roof looks flat for me.. hindi masyadong naemphasize yung tile depth, the color of your grass medyo hilaw sir also add more displacement to it. sa ilaw naman sir napansin ko yung high intensity sun rays na nag strike from your window pababa, pero sa may part ng roof parang mahina yung intensity nung lights dun. and dun sa may carport with that intensity of lights striking the building i think it is enough para magkaroon ng konting liwanag yung madilim na part ng carport mo sir.. IMHO lang naman sir.. thanks for sharing your work sir..

line design wrote:wow ang gagaling nyo talaga

Sino bang magagaling kabayan? baka pwede ka magpost dito.. http://www.cgpinoy.org/tambayan-f7/introduce-yourself-t1234.htm salamat.

welcome.. keep posting..

Ok lang mga bro mag commnet, critics is the best way to improve our work not, Thanks sa mga comments, regarding sa light source ko isa lang bro. dun sa sidewalk curve naman sya kaya lang cguro nasa angulo ng camera ko kya nasabi mong matulis, yung roof ko displacement lang yun di ko sya minodel, the rest naman mga model and all the vegetations. maraming salamat sa mga comments i will take note all the comments and apply it.

markuz23 wrote:

krizaliehs07 wrote:ganda naman po nito sir,hirap po mag comment appriciate nlang po kaya ko ibigay baka po masilip po ako ng ibang mga master hehehe, ganda tlaga sir neto

it's OK to comment sir, kaya nga po sabe ng TS na open for C&C....kahit pa po newbie lang tayo

for the TS, nice rendering sir! you can also look for other sky to fit your background...

and sa shadows boss, nalilito lang ako, parang ang dami ng light sources, (look at the foreground tree shadow, shadow on the left? and in the carport?)

and for the glass shaders, more work pa sir, kahit ako hirap din dyan... welcome sir sa CGP,where amazing happens!

by the way, sa first 5 post po yata to dapat sir?

Ok lang mga bro mag commnet, critics is the best way to improve our work and ourselves, Thanks sa mga comments, regarding sa light source ko naman is isa lang yun bro. dun sa sidewalk curve naman sya kaya lang cguro nasa angulo ng camera ko kya nasabi mong matulis, yung roof ko displacement lang yun di ko sya minodel, the rest naman mga model and all the vegetations. maraming salamat sa mga comments i will take note of it and apply it.

nc sir.. but same comment sa kanila... post more sir.. edit your plants sir to more realistic materials...