exterior practice from begginer

su to max po to.. bago palng po ngapractice ng su vray sa
.. paki comment po mga master.. salamat po sa cgp at sa mga master dito.. dami ko natotonan dito.. godbless to cgp..




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bago plng po ngapractise ng su vray sa

vray sa max po yan... pasensya na mga master..

O, try to check on your "textspeak", medyo mainit sa mata ng mods yan...
Crits;
---vertical shift; your house, beautiful as it is, seems to emulate the tower of Pisa...
---learn to scour for good seamless maps; through time you'll have made yourself a nice library of maps... better yet try to learn how to fiddle with them in photoshop; that way personalized pa sila...
---pull back on the camera, masyadong malapit sa viewer walang breathing space ang scene...
---give variety with your foliage by rotating them randomly, but don't just stop there resize them randomly too...
---placing a car on the carport would be really nice... You've managed to put your light source without burning your scene great job...

Ganda ng gawa mo sir, design & lighting... Don't stop hitting shift-Q...

O, try to check on your "textspeak", medyo mainit sa mata ng mods yan...
Crits;
---vertical shift; your house, beautiful as it is, seems to emulate the tower of Pisa...
---learn to scour for good seamless maps; through time you'll have made yourself a nice library of maps... better yet try to learn how to fiddle with them in photoshop; that way personalized pa sila...
---pull back on the camera, masyadong malapit sa viewer walang breathing space ang scene...
---give variety with your foliage by rotating them randomly, but don't just stop there resize them randomly too...
---placing a car on the carport would be really nice... You've managed to put your light source without burning your scene great job...

Ganda ng gawa mo sir, design & lighting... Don't stop hitting shift-Q...

maam. salamat po sa mga advices and comment nyo... hayaan nyo update ko nlng image na to..salamt po ulit.

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maam. salamat po sa mga advices and comment nyo... hayaan nyo update ko nlng image na to..salamt po ulit.

FYI, di po ma'am si cloud, sir po sya.

-mabasa o tumingin ka ng mga posts at comments/crits dito marami kang mapupulot na magagandang ideas at solutions sa mga bagay na di mo pa alam at minsan alam natin pero di pala maganda o tama.

goodluck!

FYI, di po ma'am si cloud, sir po sya.

pasensya ulit. pano kasi babae nman ung avatar..

sir cloud salmat po sa mga comment..

nice design by the way... nice lighting dude... tiling lang on your stone wall...and like master cloud said, put a car on your scene...

ganda nga lighting sir
try mo lang iatras kunti yung cam sir
nice render..

nice design by the way... nice lighting dude... tiling lang on your stone wall...and like master cloud said, put a car on your scene...[quote]

ganda nga lighting sir
try mo lang iatras kunti yung cam sir
nice render..

salamat po mga sir.. iupdate ko nlng po ha...

ayos po