update of my 1st vray exterior with night scene added

my fellow cgp members ito po yung update nung first post ko dito sa cgp...
i would like also to take this oppurtunity para makapagsalamat sa mga masters natin na walang sawang tumutulong saming mga newbie para matuto...
pa c&c po mga masters...

done in 3dmax 2009 + vray 1.5

day scene

By andro111985 at 2010-06-13


my first attemp to render a night scene



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and this is the old image... yung unang post ko from this thread
http://www.cgpinoy.org/architectural-f3/bungalow-t11150.htm
thanks po sa mga nag comment sa old thread ko....


By andro111985 at 2010-04-26

galing po sir ayos na ayos

jarulez_32 wrote:galing po sir aus na aus

thanks sir.. salamat po sa pagdaan...

Nice update bro..
Night scene almost real...
Congrats...

rangalua wrote:Nice update bro..
Night scene almost real...
Congrats...

thanks a lot for dropping by sir.. salamat din po sa pag-guide nyo saming mga newbie..

lupit mo na sir madadagdagan n star mo nya galing sir
like the night sence

krizaliehs07 wrote:lupit mo na sir madadagdagan n star mo nya galing sir
like the night sence

thanks sa pagsilip sir... hehehe madami pa akong kakaining bigas sir...

ganda po sir kaya lang kotse mo sa first image nakalutang yata.

genesisg23 wrote:ganda po sir kaya lang kotse mo sa first image nakalutang yata.

thanks sir.. oo nga ano nagmukha nga ciang nakalutang hehehe sa map po cguro sir d ko napansin pero actually naka allign yan anyway maraming salamat sir adjust ko cia ulit...

konting adjustment sa materials imho, mas realistic pa ang car paint sa kotse sa night scene. but overall nice.

markuss5 wrote:konting adjustment sa materials imho, mas realistic pa ang car paint sa kotse.

thanks for dropping by sir.. comment... noted po sir..

the updates are much better than the previous one.

One thing I've noticed though was the light source.
As much as possible don't place it in such a way that the light would cover all areas of your structure or perpendicular to your cam angle because it would make your structure looks flat. like your case here.

meron ding mga burnt materials dude specially yung white.

try using 3d trees, kung di 3d tong ginamit mo...

Don't forget to do post process, kahit sa image adjustment lang dude.

torvicz wrote:the updates are much better than the previous one.

One thing I've noticed though was the light source.
As much as possible don't place it in such a way that the light would cover all areas of your structure or perpendicular to your cam angle because it would make your structure looks flat. like your case here.

meron ding mga burnt materials dude specially yung white.

try using 3d trees, kung di 3d tong ginamit mo...

Don't forget to do post process, kahit sa image adjustment lang dude.

thanks po sir.. i will try to apply it on my next post... all trees are all 3d sir naapektuhan lang siguro yung quality ng mga trees dahil sa posotion ng lights ko... next time i will follow your advice on where to place my light source... thanks a lot..

nice roof, nice design, night scene most attractive for me. ang laki ng improvement compare to the previous one. post more sir!

eragasco wrote:nice roof, nice design, night scene most attractive for me. ang laki ng improvement compare to the previous one. post more sir!

thanks kabayan sa pagdaan...

laki talaga nang improvement sir,,
ganda nang render especially the night scene and the roof!

dwin_0921 wrote:laki talaga nang improvement sir,,
ganda nang render especially the night scene and the roof!

thank you sir.... sa uulitin po...

Okay...
Due to some burn-out issues as dude Torvicz mentioned, some of the details seen on the previous render (which are quite nice actually) are missing on the daytime update. I'm not sure what color mapping you used for the updates' but try reinhard; its got a nice option to tone down the burns in your scene. The yellow stripes on the kerb dont seem to fit the whole residential set-up; I feel like they belong to a commercial establishment or some such... With this type of design I'd pick post lamps that are more of the classic type (like the ones on your "old" render), what you got there lean towards the industrial-modern type. Try not to get your peripherals cropped, in this instance your roof area. I know we all want to zoom in our renders as much as possible to show off all that detail we burnt our eyebrows for, but sometimes try to pull back a little just to let the scene "breath" (got that from Vertex). Your shots look like you're shoving the house in my face.
As per dude Torvic's suggestion, play on your light & shadows, iyon kase ang isa pang nakakapagbigay buhay sa scene; think "depth".
Night scene rocks. You just forgot to light up the other eave light & the one thats actually lighted looks like its piping hot. Syempre may housing yan di ba di naman hubad na ilaw lang.

I think that's it for now, you're on the right track, try to experiment but not too much. One more thing, kung per piece lang ang laban natin try to get those render times down. Master Jesrael averages about 20 to 30 minutes per final render (please correct me if I'm wrong Jes) maybe lower, with superb outputs. Something to work on & emulate neh?...

@ sir cloud maraming salamat po sa mga payong ibinigay nyo.. lagi ko pong tatandaan ang mga ito.. nawa'y wag po sana kayong magsawang magbigay ng mga pangaral at suhistyon sa mga aming baguhan..

nice update sir.yung sasakyan lang lumutang sa day scene. yun lang naman sa akin

jepoyeah wrote:nice update sir.yung sasakyan lang lumutang sa day scene. yun lang naman sa akin

thanks po sir sa pagdaan..