simple bungalow rush with new setting

tagal ng walang post mga master rush po itong una, medyo ng experiment sa setting sa pangalawa thanks po
old setting rush

new setting

mas gusto ko yung first .nice render

-tagal mag load sa akin bro, na optimize mo ba ito?
--excited pa naman akong tingnan gawa mo...

-nice work bro...
--sa highway ba ang location nito sir? parang kulang sa setback..

ang ganda sir nito. katakot lang at magiging accident prone area kasi mukha nasa highway. alisin mo na lang kaya sir guhit sa kalsada para magmukha subdivision IMHO.
superb sir!

nice design npakasimple...mas gusto ko rin yung una..kahit rush..

nice render and lighting
- roof texture flat yung materials more displacement cguro
- gutter less po yung roof? kaya lang po matalas yung dulo
- window glass material. more reflection pa siguro
good luck bro

i like the second image. napalakas lang po shadow or contrast.

maganda din nman po yung 2nd image sana po maintain nyu yung lighting nyu sa 1st image.. ganda po..

mahilig ka sa rush a. dami mo sigurong project. ayos to simple lang pero maganda. matulis ka talaga lakay, parang yung gawa mo, he he.
-bale halata lang yung repetition ng material mo sa roof at carport.
-saka hindi nagsalubong yung lower part ng sidewalk.
Kayang iedit sa ps yan..

mas gusto ko 1st image imho lang talim nung edge mo sa roof labang gutter o senepa?

hehehe thanks sa pagdaan mga master
noted po, ok lang po ba mag gutter kahit asphalt shingle siya?ewan ko po parang pangit sa isip ko hehehe

png ba to?
tagal po mag load.
or sa connection ko lang

some comments

-work on your brick material, adding a bump map on your shader's bump slot can enhance it's appearance.
-roof texture is flat, displacement can do the trick.
-add fascia on you roof eaves.
-improve glass reflection. View the tutorials section of this site for information on how to work on that.
-improve your composition, some additional entourage via billboards or 3d trees if your machine can handle it, would be nice.

I like the first setup, stick with it for now.

Maganda na ang settings mo bro. Laki na ng improvement mo. Yund design nalang ang aayusin mo. Lalo na dyan sa roofing. Sana marender mo sya kung pano sya iconstruct. good luck!

akoy bro, galing nun second, preferred ng iba yung first kaya lang over dark yun shadow... presentation wise 2nd is perfect... kulang nga sa displacement, and texture map can still be worked out a bit. composition on 2nd image is good a s well lalo sa background. great improvement!

as for the gutter, you may not have it but I think throwing a bit of eaves there would be better.

can't wait to see more of your next works... congrats dito!

mas gusto ko ung unang settings mo, kylngn mo lng siguro dgdgn ng mga puno pra mkumpleto na ung mood ng scene mo,. malaking tulong din kc un sa ambiance ng render... keep it up..

keep on practising brow, medyo napasobra lng ung contrast sa second image.
look for better sun orientation and see much better shadow orrientation. the rest same as arkiedmund comments.
Keep it up brow!

yehey salamat sa mga commento mga master try to practice pa thanks ulit sir new setting kasi sir mabilis mag render kahit madameng puno na 3d sa old ng crash sa madaming 3d! eave pala di ko na isip hehehe

tama ka di naman pwede lagyan ng gutter asphalt shingles

the first one was a good basis keep practicing,,kainti nalang makuha mo na,,, praktis makes nilaga..my motto