Proposed Two-storey residential building

hello po mga master... post po ako latest work...
proposed two-storey residential
share ko lang po konting work habang naga practice po ng hdri envi...
dami po ito hehehe...
as always C&C's are very much welcome for improvement in the next presentation...

1st image without hdri


with Hdri










senxa na po marami po pero the same lang ung angle... gusto ko lang po ma C&C ung ambience at para ma22 about hdri...
maraming salamat po...

sir maganda para sakin yung 1st image and last image. medyo over burn lang konti

sir maganda yung 5th image sa akin..ang comment ko lang po siguro dito medyo madilim yung mga trees..imho..salamat sa pagshare sir!

jhero wrote:sir maganda para sakin yung 1st image and last image. medyo over burn lang konti

salamat sa pagdaan sir...

rtp_23 wrote:sir maganda yung 5th image sa akin..ang comment ko lang po siguro dito medyo madilim yung mga trees..imho..salamat sa pagshare sir!

ok.sir. salamat po...

hanep sir.... umaarangkada ka ngayon ah...

kjraf_011 wrote:hanep sir.... umaarangkada ka ngayon ah...

salamat sir... nakapanahon lang po...

sir nice render. medyo umuulan lang ng bricks IMO. siguro sir, yung before sa ceiling na mga bricks sa bawat hati ng poste mo, alisin mo na lang. saka sir mapping ng sidewalk. yun lang po. ganda sir with comparison pa ha

1st and 4th images for me. medyo dark nga lang.

First image is good..hirap mahuli kiliti ng HRDI..nice try

gumamit ka ba vray dirt?parang madumi yung output may kadiliman nawala yung ibang details.
nice yung image 2.

like the 1st image..4th image medyo madilim sir...nice post

nice renders! parang medyo dark lang, i dunno kung sa screen ko lang po yon, anyway gjob!

The first image "without" HDRI stands out as so much better than the rest. Did you fake lights with your HDRI scenes? That's a tricky one, very hard to do. Ask master Jarul about how he goes about it. There's a huge number of HDRI maps & sources to choose from. Hi-res lo-res put-res mahihilo ka sa kakahanap at kakatimpla. Settings kung san ba ilalagay sa vray dome, sa environment slot, sa vray override environment slot, sasmahan mo ba ng direct light or vray sun para sa hard shadows, mag isa lang ba siya para sa oft shadows, one map for all (light, enviro, ref) seperate maps ba for better control, kakalkalin ba gamma nya para magkabuhay ang shadows,sa likod ba sa harap ba light source, LWF ba o regularlang ad infinitum.
But; when you find that sweet spot its all worth it...
Some really good ones are the dosch & evermo sets di gaano malikot gamitin...

Good luck...

nice design and render...ayos.....

nice lahat! madilim lang!

brick sir medyo sobrang dami kaya medyo maitim ang output, at saka lighting, pero maganda na po ito ayos na ayos na.

5th image skin brow, medyo over burned lng ung ibang parts, try to lessen din ung stone materials, konti nlng ok n!

i like the first & second one ser mas maganda ung setting.. medyo madilim pu ung 1st image ung reflection sa salamen... maganda pu ung blending nung environment sa second image nag blend sa structure nyo. nice work ser keep it up....

oks sakin 5th image sakto lang pati reflection

sa akin 2nd image....parang pasikat ang araw.

eragasco wrote:sir nice render. medyo umuulan lang ng bricks IMO. siguro sir, yung before sa ceiling na mga bricks sa bawat hati ng poste mo, alisin mo na lang. saka sir mapping ng sidewalk. yun lang po. ganda sir with comparison pa ha

hehe... maraming salamat sir... noted po...

ARIST wrote:1st and 4th images for me. medyo dark nga lang.

salamat po sir

ortzak wrote:First image is good..hirap mahuli kiliti ng HRDI..nice try

ur ryt sir... kakapagod talaga... salamat po sa pagdaan...

aeroll wrote:gumamit ka ba vray dirt?parang madumi yung output may kadiliman nawala yung ibang details.
nice yung image 2.

yes sir... nag vray dirt din ako jan... uu medyo madilim nga po e... salamat po sa pagdaan sir...