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Post by bourne27 Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:57 am

Back to exterior ulit mga masters, matagal tagal din bago nakagawa, hehehe.. Plan and design by jeff, Model and render by your truly, usual workflow Max+Vray+photoshop.. For presentation pa rin po mga master sana ma approve na ng client, modern po ung concept and more on glass ung gusto ng client.. C n C's are much appreciated..

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Post by andro111985 Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:05 am

sir mauna na po ako... nice design and lighting sir.. minor comments: medyo may part lang sa mga glass mo na madilim sir... saka yung mga dahon sa daan medyo napadami yata saka yung type ng leaves na nakakalat hindi nag match sa mga puno na malapit sa viewer.. IMHO lang namn sir..
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Post by eragasco Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:11 am

sir napaka plain ng kulay mo. IMO sir, lagyan mo konting buhay. pero astig to sir. abangan namin update mo. ganda structure mo. ganda ng render mo thumbsup
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Post by eragasco Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:12 am

sir lipat mo na din watermark mo sa lower portion ng image, wag sa structure IMO lang sir. Smile
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Post by comgrapart Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:15 am

Wow nice! galing ng lighting, galing ng mapping materials sa akin ayos na ayos na ito sir keep posting...nice design and render.
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Post by cloud20 Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:30 am

Since you've used so much effort into scattering the leaves roadside, some effort would've been nice if applied to a grass displacement and some plants on the lawn however small it is (the lawn). A note for the dead-leaves fanboys; it isn't usually scattered that way. More often nasa street curbs yan dahil nawawalis ng hangin either from nature or from passing vehicles. Don't just go about strewing it all over, it doesn't look natural.

Some fringes on your house too, dunno how you got that but there it is. Some window blinds would've helped to minimize the "vacant" look.

Nice lighting & design.
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Post by deosrock Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:01 pm

-nice work sir!
-same comment with master cloud... update mo sir! ang ganda neto! 2thumbsup
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Post by benj.arki Wed Jun 09, 2010 6:57 pm

nice work sir! agree din po ako kay sir cloud20. about kay eragasco's comment yung watermark.. nag ganyan na din ako dati nagmumukha syang free trial. peace man Crazy_Lion
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Post by penzlake21 Thu Jun 10, 2010 12:04 am

building design is superb, konting tweak lng sa glass, BG (medypo halata un PP sa edge ng structutes) medyo darken mo ng konti ung road mat mo para umangat ung structure. the rest OK. thumbsup
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Post by bourne27 Thu Jun 10, 2010 6:18 am

@master cloud: Salamat masters sa pagdaan, update ko nalang po ung bago, i'll take ur advice about the blinds.

@eragasco: salamat sa pagdaan

@penzlake: salamat sa pagdaan

@comgrapart: salamat sa pagdaan

@benjarki: salamat sa pagdaan

@penzlake: salamat sa pagdaan

update ko nalng po.. thumbsup
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Post by jheteg Thu Jun 10, 2010 6:19 am

crop nalang po siguro ng konti yung road. agaw pansin po kasi.
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Post by ARIST Thu Jun 10, 2010 6:30 am

nice design and render, konting abubots na rin sa loob or blinds na lang.
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Post by bourne27 Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:53 am

Salamat mga masters sa pagdalaw, images has been updated.. : )
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Post by skyscraper100 Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:58 am

looks nice. ganda rin ng building. nice work Very Happy
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Post by bourne27 Fri Jun 11, 2010 10:09 am

skyscraper100 wrote:looks nice. ganda rin ng building. nice work Very Happy

Thanks sir for Dropping by..
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Post by cloud20 Fri Jun 11, 2010 12:11 pm

I wish you'd kept the previous image here too; para lang makita how very well you've done with your updates. As comparison. Pa crit sa design ha (though its never really proper to crit on design) canopy on mid door kawawa naman... I'd put a slight tinge of off-white to some parts; or rough-finish some just to give it a lil twist...
Very good po...
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Post by Galaites07 Fri Jun 11, 2010 2:07 pm

sir update mo na ito with colors and texture....

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Post by bourne27 Sat Jun 12, 2010 2:49 am

Pasensya na mga master for deleting the old post, i've already re-post it.. tnx Wink
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Post by gerico_eco Mon Jun 14, 2010 7:10 am

deads yung scene mo sir.
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