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Post by ondoi Sun Jun 06, 2010 2:36 am

mga sir and Masters, newbie po ako c&c po para umunlad pa.. maraming salamat po! mabuhay CGpians! buttrock

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comments pa mga sir at masters.. yung grass di talaga maganda.. patulong po pano makagawa ng grass n medyo maayos.. salamat!


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Post by ondoi Sun Jun 06, 2010 2:40 am

su+vray+cs2 po ito. tirahin nyo na po para umunlad pa.. marami po talaga akong matutunan dito. marami pong salamat!
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Post by cloud20 Sun Jun 06, 2010 2:49 am

At least nasa harap ang sun mo neh...
Canopy for the main entrance; you could extend yung nasa right side maganda din nun...
Background para hindi bangin ang nasa likod...
Work on the grass displacement...
Eto pinaka importante: practice like mad. Everyday. Never for one second think alam mo na lahat. Never rest; well paminsan minsan siguro pero with the fast pace out there hilong talilong ka pag nagpaiwan ka.

Other than that patok na tong render mo ser.
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Post by ondoi Sun Jun 06, 2010 3:02 am

salamat sir sa comments.. marami pa nga talaga akong kulang.. more practice pa.. tama sir practice like mad everyday.. noted. Godbless!
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Post by KreativeKingdom Sun Jun 06, 2010 10:44 am

the brightness of your wall tend to washed-out the details (burned-out) try to adjust it.
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Post by Canadium Sun Jun 06, 2010 3:23 pm

Nice start Sir. nothing much to comment kasi nasabi na. Dagdag ko na lang siguro, Practice makes perfect!
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Post by ondoi Sun Jun 06, 2010 7:10 pm

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the brightness of your wall tend to washed-out the details (burned-out) try to adjust it.


oo nga sir maliwanag nasunog parin.. cge sir babawasan ko pa ung GI sky. salamat sir sa pagdaan..
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Post by ondoi Sun Jun 06, 2010 7:32 pm

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Nice start Sir. nothing much to comment kasi nasabi na. Dagdag ko na lang siguro, Practice makes perfect!

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salamat Sir Canadium sa pagdaan.. madami pa ko kailangan malaman.. 1.5 month palang akong nagaaral ng sketchup and vray.. autocad ung dating pinagaaralan ko.. practice practice lang.. marami pa kong katanungan dito and i hope na matulungan nyo ko.. salamat! Godbless CGpians!
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Post by eragasco Sun Jun 06, 2010 8:14 pm

ayos sir, same as sir cloud. malabangin yung likod mo, parang nakalutang. pero ayos sir, ako di pa ako marunong mag-vray. konti pa sir, makukuha mo yan. kinig ka lang sa mga masters. wait namin update mo. hippie
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Post by ondoi Sun Jun 06, 2010 8:23 pm

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ayos sir, same as sir cloud. malabangin yung likod mo, parang nakalutang. pero ayos sir, ako di pa ako marunong mag-vray. konti pa sir, makukuha mo yan. kinig ka lang sa mga masters. wait namin update mo.


thank you sir sa pagdaan.. uupdate naten to.. practice lang tayo ng practice.. thumbsup
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Post by ondoi Tue Jun 08, 2010 12:03 am

mga sir updated ko gawa ko.. comments pa kau sir para umunlad pa... salamat!
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Post by allnem Tue Jun 08, 2010 12:29 am

thumbsup Very Happy Very Happy ok po start nyo ,,, 2thumbsup
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Post by eragasco Tue Jun 08, 2010 12:46 am

wow may bagong update si sir. galing a. may kotse pa. laki ng improvement natin sir a. konting konti na lang. hehehe. reflection sir ng window mo ask ka sa mga masters kung ano bagay dun o sobra reflection o dapat hdri? ganda na sir tapos kita na din yung nasa likod na structure. yung unang pic kala ko wala yun e. naaninaw na yung window. nice! more pa sir!
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Post by ondoi Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:15 am

salamat sir allnem! Very Happy
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Post by ondoi Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:27 am

sir eragasco salamat! sa reflection nga ng window.. pano kaya ung hdri sa reflection? fresnel ior lang yun eh 1.80..
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Post by osibalasi Tue Jun 08, 2010 2:37 am

nice render sir,...galing po Smile Yung displacement mo po sa grass, try mo pong Vray displacement modifier, amt. is .01 or .1 ,para po mas maganda,... Goodluck po,
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Post by ondoi Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:09 am

salamat sir osibalasi! galing din mga render mo.. vray displacement modifier amount ba sir na sinasabi nyo yung pang suvray ba? yung makikita sa vray render options?
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Post by torvicz Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:34 am

sa palagay ko lang nakakahilo ung facade mo kase
magkaiba ung height ng windows mo. ok lang cguro kung parehasin nalang ung height nila.

ung brick para saken tanggalin mo na lang.
di bagay e, paint nalang siguro, accent color nalang.

try mo na rin limitahin ung pavement hanggang pintuan lang, tapos
put some plants na lang to add softness at greenery na rin.

dagdag mo nalng to dude sa mga comments ni dude cloud.
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Post by ondoi Tue Jun 08, 2010 4:33 am

salamat sa pagdaan sir idol torvics! sa window sir awning ung sa taas.. ng sliding.. bumawi para sa maluwag na ventilation ng bahay.. ung maliit na window naman sir dun ung kitchen sink.. sa brick sir oo nga medyo di na umayon.. nadaanan ng canopy.. noted to sir.. sa pavement sir hirap pa ko sa vegetations.. at wala pa kong mga plants.. hirap pa din ako sa grass.. titignan ko makakaya ko sir.. salamat sir Idol!
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Post by jheteg Tue Jun 08, 2010 6:14 am

nice start po sir. practice lang po and try to discover. marami po tayong guide and tutorial dito. thumbsup
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Post by cloud20 Tue Jun 08, 2010 7:13 am

Okay...
---Andun pa rin ang bangin sa likod; put a plane that approximates your horizon slapped with a grass texture and some tree-boards to cover up said horizon line. Bangin solved.
---I'm not familiar with SU, but with max & vray displacement: got grass map? got CS2? turn that green grass map into a black & white bump map use B&W map as vray displacement mod map file use 2d displacement (3d will knock your max back to desktop not unless you got a super rig or 64bits) crank up the amounts try 3meters (use whatever units you use) para makita mo kung me nangyari kasi malamang natakpan na ng grass ang bahay mo nun then from there adjust ka. Grass solved.
---Window. Diffuse black. Reflection just a teenie bit put a falloff map on it. Refraction white use 1.545 for refraction. Work on those. When you got them working like a well oiled tagteam drop a noise map on the bump map and try working on that. Finally, some blinds behind the windows to complete the package.

---Car not good. Not unless benefactor yan ng nakatira dyan.

One last thing; an Internet connection is absolutely priceless with regards sa trabaho naten. A ginormous resource is waiting out there for you to plunder. Tutorials. Maps. Models. Apps. Youporn.
Go kid spread your wild oats...
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Post by kira_01 Tue Jun 08, 2010 8:46 am

Sir sa tingin ko masyado malakas reflection sa windows.
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Post by ondoi Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:50 pm

wah! Maraming salamat Master cloud! matuturuan talaga ako ng leksyon dito.. noted to master.. Godbless!
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Post by ondoi Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:53 pm

sir kira oo nga malakas pa ung reflection ng windows.. aadjust naten to sir.. practice practice lng talaga... salamat sa pagdaan! buttrock
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