Blue (wires & settings)

hi guys and gals of cgp just want to share another render still on practice mode wala lang magawa kaya practice muna kapag gabi and weekends, hope to give your honest critic just to improve my works,salamat po

same workflow autocad + 3dmax vray + konting ps lang

day (edited)


night (edited)


night scene wires and settings

-antindi naman nito sir!
--well done master!

sir parang nasubra an ata nang ilaw ang mga unan,,,,puting2x na kasi sir,,,pero the rest ok na,,,

nice work! cguro sana po konti lang yung bukas na lights dun sa day kasi parang parehong night render. just an observation. overall great work po!

galing..parang futuristic na yung mga bldg. mo sa labas..nice render..

Nice practice dude, 2nd image for me kasi mas smooth ung image unlike sa 1st parang sharp sya IMHO.
-Background issue un 1st image parang night scene (black & white ) ang dating pero morning scene ka.
-Last comments on round table base nagmukang glass ung materials.

Nice work bro! comments ko lng bro yung flooring mo sa 1st image yung shadow nya masyadong sharp....I like the second image but i notice the cove light there is black on it...edit mo nlang sa photoshop bro....the rest panalo na sa akin.

Nice work bro! comments ko lng bro yung flooring mo sa 1st image yung shadow nya masyadong sharp....I like the second image but i notice the cove light there is black on it...edit mo nlang sa photoshop bro....the rest panalo na sa akin.

@ deosrock - thanks bro
@ pipes - oo nga ehe,inedit ko na bro
@ skyscraper100 - hindi ko nga napatay,ayan pinatay ko na ehe
@ lei23 - oo nga wala ako makita ibang bg kasi thanks
@ Ernest - kasi ung 2nd image mas malaki yung output nya ehe, yung bg sa 1st image ps lang yun para maging umaga ehe,salamat sa comment bro
@ comgrapart - thanks dude try to lessen the sharpness nextym ehe

Bro bakit inabot ng 3 hours yung night scene mo? Are you using photometric lights?Can i see the wires?Thanks..

nice rendering sir

nice. i like the background wall.

ayun! ok! great work

sir quick,nice one,nothing to say,im

wooooooo...grabe ang bumb a.1st image may reflection ba carpet parang may kintab sya?

quick pa cc sa rendering..

- anong colormapping natin? linear? burn kasi masyado yung day scene mo, explore mo expo and hsv expo
- background is not good, definitely off to me.
- wood floor, babaan mo blur value nya, para lumabas yung details.
- to much reflection sa lahat ng materials, but i dont know kung ganun talaga yun. lagyan mo ng variation..

more power ok.

@ARCHITHEKTHURA - bro post ko na yung wire pacheck naman ang tagal nga ng render, ung lights ko may photometric 11pieces,vray plane 12pcs ginamit ko sa cove light and doon sa may design,subdivision 2,help naman with the settings and ano pa problema sa render para umasenso ehe

@ kira_01 - salamat bro
@ jheteg - salamat cabalen aburi me (nagustuhan mo)
@ skyscraper100 - thanks again dude
@ one9dew - ano na dude nangyari sa practice natin?salamat sa pagsilip
@ zdesign - may problema sa bump bro?ehe hindi ko gets,,yun nga hindi ko alam bakit parang kumintab wala naman ako nilagay reflection,try ko ulit render bro salamat
@ dpyxl - bro kumusta?gimik na tayo ehe,anyway reinhard gamit ko bro yun lang kasi nagagamit ko try ko pa magExplore subukan ko yung sinabi mo, hindi rin ako satisfied sa background wala kasi akong ibang makita pero magsearch pa rin ako, wood floor tagal ko na problema flooring ko hindi ko makuha tamang timpla , reflection- sige bro pag-aralan ko pa,,

salamat sa crits and suggestion i really appreciate them

Mga nagpatagal ng render, hula ko lang
-displacement on your carpet
-too much reflection on your floor
-global subdivisions 2, set it to 1, adjust your subdivisions on material editor slot.
-anu specs ng pc mo? kung core 2 duo normal lang 3 hours, if quad matagal yung 3 hours.

and on the rendering side comments:
-improve composition, I encourage you not to use those evermotion plates, or at least change the textures.
-vases doesn't look good on this scene
-pendant lights looks weird because of the material, vray light mat ba nilagay mo?
-better BG selection

yaug_03 wrote:Mga nagpatagal ng render, hula ko lang
-displacement on your carpet
-too much reflection on your floor
-global subdivisions 2, set it to 1, adjust your subdivisions on material editor slot.
-anu specs ng pc mo? kung core 2 duo normal lang 3 hours, if quad matagal yung 3 hours.

agree ako sa mga to..lalo na yung displacement
at lalo na kung naka core 2 duo lang...

ayos to sir..mas gusto ko 1st image..parang medyo nagblur ata yung carpet nung 2nd image? nawala yung fur eh..imho..tapos bg lang sa first image..

the rest sir panalo! salamat sa pagshare..

yaug_03 wrote:Mga nagpatagal ng render, hula ko lang
-displacement on your carpet
-too much reflection on your floor
-global subdivisions 2, set it to 1, adjust your subdivisions on material editor slot.
-anu specs ng pc mo? kung core 2 duo normal lang 3 hours, if quad matagal yung 3 hours.

and on the rendering side comments:
-improve composition, I encourage you not to use those evermotion plates, or at least change the textures.
-vases doesn't look good on this scene
-pendant lights looks weird because of the material, vray light mat ba nilagay mo?
-better BG selection

- yup core 2 duo nga bro kaya pala matagal try ko lang kasi ung global subds na 2 ehe nakatulog tuloy ako sa tagal
- thanks sa comments i like them kulang pa ako sa aral practice ulit and basa ehe

jarul wrote:

yaug_03 wrote:Mga nagpatagal ng render, hula ko lang
-displacement on your carpet
-too much reflection on your floor
-global subdivisions 2, set it to 1, adjust your subdivisions on material editor slot.
-anu specs ng pc mo? kung core 2 duo normal lang 3 hours, if quad matagal yung 3 hours.

agree ako sa mga to..lalo na yung displacement
at lalo na kung naka core 2 duo lang...

wow bro thanks

rtp_23 wrote:ayos to sir..mas gusto ko 1st image..parang medyo nagblur ata yung carpet nung 2nd image? nawala yung fur eh..imho..tapos bg lang sa first image..

the rest sir panalo! salamat sa pagshare..

oo nga pansin ko panget nga napili kong bg, sa carpet baka dahil sa madilim?di ko rin alam kasi,salamat bro

Pinsan tindi ah..i like the second image mas cool sya sa mata :-)..marka ng adona ne..hahahhaa