master Bathroom WIP

share ko lang itong sideline ko dito na ilang ulit ng pina-revised pero lagi naman rush...di ako makadiskarte ng magandang quality dahil nga rush. dito ko na sa WIP thread nilagay kasi may pina pa adjust pa rin itong gawa ko..

..ngayon ito yung na-submit ko lang last time and ito kinalabasan: orignal file walang photoshop itong na submit ko: sa akin maganda na pero i need your comment and suggestion para ma evaluate ko yung sarili ko.

workflow: max2010 + vray


PS kalandian
added filter: lens correction> vignette effect + color correction


added filter: brightness and contrast

sir 2nd image for me will be great option for presentation..good luck

NICE SET OF RENDERS. I LOVE IMAGE 2. MAS WARM YUNG DATING,IT DOESNT LOOK SATURATED. ang ganda ng design

moothe wrote:sir 2nd image for me will be great option for presentation..good luck

salamat pre pero may gustong ibang feeling nang render yung designer. naguguluhan ako e sa kanila....

kat palmares wrote:NICE SET OF RENDERS. I LOVE IMAGE 2. MAS WARM YUNG DATING,IT DOESNT LOOK SATURATED. ang ganda ng design

thanks kat, pero mukhang di pa rin papasa yang gawa ko. makulit din yung designer e. yung flower saka yung plant dun sa vanity counter pinatatangal. hay....salamat sa pagdaan

This render is very nice! The photoshoped 2nd image is the best for me. Yung lighting sa first & 3rd image is so CG looking.

Canadium wrote:This render is very nice! The photoshoped 2nd image is the best for me. Yung lighting sa first & 3rd image is so CG looking.

thanks sir canadium, post ko yung revised nito nung isa pang master na nakilala ko dito. i hope mag join sya. for me parang may kulang kasi sa lighting kaya mukhang 3d pa rin ang quality.

ayus sir texture lighting... v-ray fur lufet sakin kasi matagal magrender pagmay v-ray fur hehehe

jhero wrote:ayus sir texture lighting... v-ray fur lufet sakin kasi matagal magrender pagmay v-ray fur hehehe

thanks man, yung carpet pre vray mesh yan nakuha ko din dito sa free stuff natin. mas mablis sya mag render kasi mesh na nga sya. di ko alam gumamit ng vray fur e. thanks to crainlee for sharing this stuff check mo and download. makakatulong yun pre.

ganda sir, I like the 2nd image...nice presentation.

salamat sir berto at nagustuhan nyo po!!!

sir, maganda 2nd image warm ang ambience. yung carpet lang adjacent to bathtub and water closet out of place sya. camera parang mababa--- rest is ok.

I'm really a bit hesitant to comment here, interior kase eh ehe... I almost never post interiors but I'll try to give this one a shot...

Focus na lang tayo sa first image since ito ang raw...
---there's an overall lack of "shininess"; usually kase pag T&B medyo makintab, or madulas, or something-if you're going to follow the norm... Instead, I like what you did here; parang everything seems natural... the monotone actually works to bring everything into a cohesive whole... On the otherhand, same monotone also brings to the scene a little bit lack of depth... Anyways rectified naman sa PS but if the raw came out with no need for post pre time saved po diba...

Hope nakatulong kahit kaunti lang...

2nd image is a-ok for me

Galing mo talaga sir!..dagdag sa collection na naman ito,hehe..

2nd image for me bro
design & renders rocks...

@ master cloud: another words of wisdom from you...

i think you can play with you color mapping setting here...or you can try this too...

i got this idea from sir enigma...

under vray:indirect illumination(GI), on the post processing section..set both saturation and contrast to 1.25. What it will do is pump up your colors on the output, to help improve color reproduction of your image.

One thing more, you can also add a subtle light on your scene, just to add some brightness and punch to it.

You can also rectify your glossies a bit, if you like.

Hope i was able to help.

nice output sir 2nd image po

2nd image for me. nice color correction.

ito lang dagdag na comment ko sir

i hope you dont mind minark ko ung image



this line tends to deceive the viewer. sa biglang tingin ang effect parang 2 magkaibang planes / scenes. suggestion ko shift the camera slightly to the right para mas defined ung depth ng room.

may space pa ba between the glass ng shower and bathtub?kasi yung mga towel sa may bathtub parang pumasok sa glass.,,yun lang naman ganda ng render bro

@ topic
2nd image din para sa kin ganda ng design and render

@celes
nice comment sir very informative

KreativeKingdom wrote:sir, maganda 2nd image warm ang ambience. yung carpet lang adjacent to bathtub and water closet out of place sya. camera parang mababa--- rest is ok.

thanks sa comment sir, nakalimutan ko pala sabihin di ko design bossing yan render lang. yung camera angle yung designer pumili..salamat sa pagdaan and welcome din bro!!!

cloud20 wrote:I'm really a bit hesitant to comment here, interior kase eh ehe... I almost never post interiors but I'll try to give this one a shot...

Focus na lang tayo sa first image since ito ang raw...
---there's an overall lack of "shininess"; usually kase pag T&B medyo makintab, or madulas, or something-if you're going to follow the norm... Instead, I like what you did here; parang everything seems natural... the monotone actually works to bring everything into a cohesive whole... On the otherhand, same monotone also brings to the scene a little bit lack of depth... Anyways rectified naman sa PS but if the raw came out with no need for post pre time saved po diba...

Hope nakatulong kahit kaunti lang...

thanks sir cloud, pareho kayo ng comment ni fafi erick kualng sa reflection. i think its the material nga that lacks the rendering. and also ang comment din ng designer masyadong monotone nga daw. "shininess" din kulang from the fixtures. what i think, 2 major items i missed here the scene, material and lighting. tama kayo sir cloud about the kulang sa "depth" masyadong flat tignan yung render. i can say half baked pa rin itong render na ito. salamat cabalen..hehe

ortzak wrote:2nd image is a-ok for me

hehe thanks sir ortzak!!! with PS kalandian lang ang secret pag rush ang trabaho.

samokmisay wrote:Galing mo talaga sir!..dagdag sa collection na naman ito,hehe..

dagdag nga sir pero kailangan pa pihitin kulang pa rin at kailangan pa rin matuto sa mga master.

rangalua wrote:2nd image for me bro
design & renders rocks...


@ master cloud: another words of wisdom from you...

salamat sir!!!

arkiedmund wrote:i think you can play with you color mapping setting here...or you can try this too...

i got this idea from sir enigma...

under vray:indirect illumination(GI), on the post processing section..set both saturation and contrast to 1.25. What it will do is pump up your colors on the output, to help improve color reproduction of your image.

One thing more, you can also add a subtle light on your scene, just to add some brightness and punch to it.

You can also rectify your glossies a bit, if you like.

Hope i was able to help.

wow sir mund!!!sabi ko na nga ba may tinatago pa kayo sekreto galing din sa mga master e.....take note ko agad yang tuts nyo!! thanks for enlighting me with this simple technique!!! mabuhay po kayo!!!

allnem wrote:nice output sir 2nd image po

thanks sir madami na nag vo-vote sa 2nd image wahehe...salamat sa pagdaan

yaug_03 wrote:2nd image for me. nice color correction.

salamat pre..

celes wrote:ito lang dagdag na comment ko sir

i hope you dont mind minark ko ung image



this line tends to deceive the viewer. sa biglang tingin ang effect parang 2 magkaibang planes / scenes. suggestion ko shift the camera slightly to the right para mas defined ung depth ng room.

isa pang master....kayo pa sir syempre pwedeng pwede!!!! ang bilis ng mata nyo talaga. tignan ko kung ma adjust ko yung camera dahil napili ng designer yung angle na yan sir. yun pang isang reason nagkakaroon ng illusion ang lumulutang yung handle ng shower door. ang solution ko lagyan ko ng fill lights sa may bantang camera para magkaroon ng depth yung dalawang side ng shower.

qcksilver_2005 wrote:may space pa ba between the glass ng shower and bathtub?kasi yung mga towel sa may bathtub parang pumasok sa glass.,,yun lang naman ganda ng render bro

tama kayo dyan sir nakapatong yung glass sa ledge ng tub comment din ng designer yan. pero in the first place sya naman nagpalagay nyan.....salamat sa pagdaan sir!

fpj999 wrote:@ topic
2nd image din para sa kin ganda ng design and render

@celes
nice comment sir very informative

yung design sir credit sa designer. magaling magdesign e. thanks sa pagdaan

lupit sir for me good na po ung last 2 image for the presentaion..nice