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Post by eihraj Sat May 22, 2010 11:57 pm

Mga sirs post ko po ulit ito... this was posted 15 April 2010. I did some alteration as per your comments... To sir Archki_rain on water, grass and entourage. To sir Reyknow on 2d to 3d trees. To sir Lightfoot on the structure, but I'm still working on adding some elements on the structure... Again your comments and suggestions are most welcome. Thanks to CGP.

Done in AutoCADD, Max 2009 + V-Ray & CS3

Day Scene
Pool Area II Poolside-day

Night Scene
Pool Area II Poolside-night

...Thanks a lot to sir Balongeisler.
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Post by allnem Sun May 23, 2010 12:23 am

2thumbsup galing sir... 2thumbsup
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Post by jarul Sun May 23, 2010 12:25 am

nice
DAYSCENE
- colorbleeding yung grass
- sunog dun sa upper part ng bldg
- glass reflection
- pwede pa ma improve ang grass
- turn the light off sa dayscene

NIGHTSCENE
- dapat may pagkablueish yung bldg. base sa bg(sky)

update nyo po ulit.
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Post by icefrik19 Sun May 23, 2010 12:28 am

like the 2nd image may change color nung water imho lang nman
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Post by jhero Sun May 23, 2010 12:45 am

-grass sir dagdagan mo pa ng displacement...
-katulad ng kay master jarul yung reflection ng window
-sunog nga dun sa upper part ng bldg.
gusto ko yung 2nd image
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Post by eihraj Sun May 23, 2010 3:42 am

allnem wrote:2thumbsup galing sir... 2thumbsup

sir allnem thanks po sa pagdaan
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Post by eihraj Sun May 23, 2010 3:47 am

jarul wrote:nice
DAYSCENE
- colorbleeding yung grass
- sunog dun sa upper part ng bldg
- glass reflection
- pwede pa ma improve ang grass
- turn the light off sa dayscene

NIGHTSCENE
- dapat may pagkablueish yung bldg. base sa bg(sky)

update nyo po ulit.

master jarul thanks for your comments... i-update ko po ito... thanks ulit.
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Post by eihraj Sun May 23, 2010 3:49 am

icefrik19 wrote:like the 2nd image may change color nung water imho lang nman

sir icefrik19 thank you po
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Post by eihraj Sun May 23, 2010 3:49 am

jhero wrote:-grass sir dagdagan mo pa ng displacement...
-katulad ng kay master jarul yung reflection ng window
-sunog nga dun sa upper part ng bldg.
gusto ko yung 2nd image

noted po sir... maraming salamat po sa pagdaan.
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Post by deosrock Sun May 23, 2010 4:21 am

-nice work.. update mo nalang sir! 2thumbsup
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Post by eihraj Sun May 23, 2010 8:19 am

deosrock wrote:-nice work.. update mo nalang sir! 2thumbsup

ok po sir... i-update ko ito... thanks!
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Post by balongeisler Sun May 23, 2010 8:37 am

konting adjustment nlng pards
-sa reflection and water
-umangat ung grass natin
-adjust na rin ung multiplier ng sun.
-override mo lng ung grass to prevent overbleeding.
the rest is approve.
keep it up. 2thumbsup
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Post by eihraj Mon May 24, 2010 5:43 am

balongeisler wrote:konting adjustment nlng pards
-sa reflection and water
-umangat ung grass natin
-adjust na rin ung multiplier ng sun.
-override mo lng ung grass to prevent overbleeding.
the rest is approve.
keep it up. 2thumbsup

noted sir bal... i"ll do the adjustments... thanks!
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Post by brodger Mon May 24, 2010 6:09 am

like the 2nd image also...ganda ng lighting sa building..just take note as sir Jarul said.make it a little bluish.post more SIr!! Smile
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Post by lightfoot Mon May 24, 2010 12:45 pm

nice sir i like the night scene
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Post by lightfoot Mon May 24, 2010 1:07 pm

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hope you dont mind, i did some simple post process test para makuha yun bluish color sa building sa night scene.

image 1: original night scene
image 2: "Para sa bluish color" sa ps duplicate the image, then image>adjustment>desaturate, then image>adjustment>variations(click lang ng click sa mga colors hanggang makuha mo un desired color mo), tapos set un layer to overlay adjust na lang un opacity ng layer, added din brightness/contrast sa overlay layer inerase ko din un sky part sa overlay para same sky bg siya sa original image.
image 3: "personal preference" same process sa image 2 more on blue and mgenta lang unlike the 2nd image the more on cyan un variation na ginamit ko. after merging the layers i added filter>distort>diffuse glow i suggest you do this on a duplicate layer para maerase mo un areas na dapat walang glow, then added image>adjustment>photo filter i used a warming filter para may konting touch of yellow

yan hope nakatulong sana useful to hirap kasi magrender uli diba if kaya sa post process mas save ang time at visible pa kagad ang output:D heheh di kasi ko magaling mgrender dinadaan na lang sa ps hehe:D
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Post by vinc3nt12 Mon May 24, 2010 7:25 pm

-i like the night scene. sana nga lang mas bluish pa ng konti ung ambience para mas generate ng feeling of realism.
-im having problems to where your sun is at. (day scene) from what i can see from the boundary fence is that your sun is at the right side, whereas the shadow from your tree is in the opposite direction. minor inconsistencies lang pero nice work overall. Smile
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Post by Canadium Mon May 24, 2010 8:58 pm

Nice renders Sir! My comments had been mentioned already.
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Post by eihraj Tue May 25, 2010 7:51 am

samokmisay wrote:like the 2nd image also...ganda ng lighting sa building..just take note as sir Jarul said.make it a little bluish.post more SIr!! Smile

thank sir... yup i will update.
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Post by eihraj Tue May 25, 2010 7:52 am

lightfoot wrote:nice sir i like the night scene

thank you sir lightfoot.
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Post by eihraj Tue May 25, 2010 7:54 am

lightfoot wrote:Pool Area II Poolarea

hope you dont mind, i did some simple post process test para makuha yun bluish color sa building sa night scene.

image 1: original night scene
image 2: "Para sa bluish color" sa ps duplicate the image, then image>adjustment>desaturate, then image>adjustment>variations(click lang ng click sa mga colors hanggang makuha mo un desired color mo), tapos set un layer to overlay adjust na lang un opacity ng layer, added din brightness/contrast sa overlay layer inerase ko din un sky part sa overlay para same sky bg siya sa original image.
image 3: "personal preference" same process sa image 2 more on blue and mgenta lang unlike the 2nd image the more on cyan un variation na ginamit ko. after merging the layers i added filter>distort>diffuse glow i suggest you do this on a duplicate layer para maerase mo un areas na dapat walang glow, then added image>adjustment>photo filter i used a warming filter para may konting touch of yellow

yan hope nakatulong sana useful to hirap kasi magrender uli diba if kaya sa post process mas save ang time at visible pa kagad ang output:D heheh di kasi ko magaling mgrender dinadaan na lang sa ps hehe:D

sir it's ok... actually it's a very nice information on ps... thanks!
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Post by eihraj Tue May 25, 2010 8:00 am

vinc3nt12 wrote:-i like the night scene. sana nga lang mas bluish pa ng konti ung ambience para mas generate ng feeling of realism.
-im having problems to where your sun is at. (day scene) from what i can see from the boundary fence is that your sun is at the right side, whereas the shadow from your tree is in the opposite direction. minor inconsistencies lang pero nice work overall. Smile

i-update ko na lang po ito sir, yes the sun is in the rightside pero around 160degrees if you're looking on the plan at yun structure naman eh naka-45degrees kaya medyo tinamaan. salamat sa pagdaan sir.
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Post by eihraj Tue May 25, 2010 8:02 am

Canadium wrote:Nice renders Sir! My comments had been mentioned already.

thanks sir canadium!
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Post by Yhna Tue May 25, 2010 8:23 am

comments are said. update nalang po sir.
nice set of renders. i love the night scene.
enjoy your stay sa CGP. thumbsup
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Post by Ranie Tue May 25, 2010 9:12 am

Sir ang galing!!! anu gamit nyo sir na Graphic Card? Thanks

Keep on Posting sir!!!
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