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Post by Galaites07 Wed May 19, 2010 1:10 am

First topic message reminder :

Share lang ulit. Another Farnsworth House style of render inspired by Canadium and Jarul.

Ung other grass part using noise and motion blur lang.

Improvement din sa glass.


3dmax+vray+photoshop

@ core2duo+3gig ram laptop(no kidding)

approx 30mins final render at 2 pass light cache.

C&c nalng bros.
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Post by cloud20 Sat May 22, 2010 7:50 am

Straightforward comments;
---Lighting visible but no light sources/fixtures within the house, a rudimentary overlooking of the visually obvious...
---Main environment light source is located on the right side, as the BG implies but environment lighting is cast on the left side...
---I will have to disagree on the grass; its tiled with straight unnatural streaks...
---Entourage looks a bit too.."managed"... for me that is...

Good effort though its really very hard when you have 3dgods to contend with...


And oh, you might wanna cover your product ID, not unless you wanna feed it to the sharks... Booboo mein freund...

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Post by Galaites07 Sat May 22, 2010 8:12 am

thanks po sir sa pag-comment.

No problem sir mas marami pang 3D maniac sa Evermotion site. Look at Jaruls post there 2 lang ang nagcomment samantalang punong puno ng papuri dito. I hope you understand my position.

ung grass technique eh very common na technique at pwedeng i-improve of anybody I just saying how to do it. Look at 3dseventh and redvertex use of grass. lame technique but passed to the best.

ung night scene probe lang na kaya nating ibahin ung scene as commented
and pointing out the obvious is kinda.....

anyways, thank ulit and thanks for the advisory.

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Post by cloud20 Sat May 22, 2010 7:17 pm

Galaites07 wrote:thanks po sir sa pag-comment. ---always my pleasure...

No problem sir mas marami pang 3D maniac sa Evermotion site. Look at Jaruls post there 2 lang ang nagcomment samantalang punong puno ng papuri dito. I hope you understand my position. ---I do understand your position & I'm not your platitude lover but I've noticed you've got a Jarul fixation; not healthy...

ung grass technique eh very common na technique at pwedeng i-improve of anybody I just saying how to do it. Look at 3dseventh and redvertex use of grass. lame technique but passed to the best. ---for one who advocates "developing" a personal style you sure are fond of name dropping; try looking up Manolo Amio one of the best in the biz redvortex 3dsavant my cute butt...

ung night scene probe lang na kaya nating ibahin ung scene as commented
and pointing out the obvious is kinda..... ---kaya pala nating ibahin sana itinama na po natin ang lighting nyo salisaliwa eh; what obviousity did I point out po ba is kinda a what?...

anyways, thank ulit and thanks for the advisory.
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Post by Galaites07 Sat May 22, 2010 9:45 pm

thanks for taking time to comment bossing. till next time. Smile

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Post by corpsegrinder Sun May 23, 2010 12:11 am

i have to agree to sir clouds' comments,all.. Its not that bad to use those 2d trees sa background(anyway nightscene naman), palitan nyo na lang siguro at pumili kayo ng mas babagay sa scene and sa lighting.. You can defringe your image in photoshop para medyo matanggal yung fringes/silhouette especially sa trees.. Pewde rin ba malaman ang set-up ng lighting nyo dito? Para saken, napasobra ang blue/purple ng environment... One thing, just my own opinion, scenes like these, its not nice to see plants that are very common in almost every exterior architectural renders. or atleast maraming klase ng plants ang nilagay mo. Suggestion lng naman.. thumbsup
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Post by Galaites07 Sun May 23, 2010 1:43 am

-I didnt say I disagree.

-tress not 2d, its 3d material needs some adjustment.

-lighting set-up top secret.

-not enough resources fo trees, pasensya na kulang pa sa free downloads.

-thanks

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Post by ARCHITHEKTHURA Sun May 23, 2010 2:12 am

Good job Sir. I like both of them.Night scene can be more lit to see more on interiors. Nice cam angle and cool composition.Keep posting sir!Cheers! thumbsup
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Post by corpsegrinder Sun May 23, 2010 2:15 am

hndi ko rin sinabing nagdisagree ka..

hehehe top secret, nice.. anyway tinanong ko lang naman, wala akong balak gayahin ang set-up mo.
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Post by Galaites07 Sun May 23, 2010 4:42 am

Thanks for the comments and crits guys.

@ ARCHITHEKTHURA, sir mukhang wala ka ng bagong post even doon sa another site.

NIGHT SCENE SET-UP: HDRI environment only.

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