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Post by Invincible Tue May 18, 2010 5:41 pm

paramdam lng po mga master. . aYOKo talaga muna mag3d kc nagaaral ako pero pinilit ako nung frend ko kc need na asap . .sori mejo rush ung work kc sinimulan ko xa 3am natapos ako 7am na. . . . 22mins per render medium setup lang po . . .pero update ko pa xa soon. . .ligo na ako pasok na ulit review center tongue
done ni revit max tapos ps. . .

comments na lng po to improve

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Post by arkiedmund Tue May 18, 2010 6:39 pm

ok na ito...things to work on:

1. stretched yung bitmap ng sign boards.
2. camera adjustment, stretched yung view sa 2nd image, sa 1st image parang nagmukhang maliit yung structure.
3. the rest is all good. konting tweak sa compostion is guess, and this will be fine.

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Post by jheteg Tue May 18, 2010 8:20 pm

konting post production nalang po siguro like brightness, contrast and sharpening. imho lang po.
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Post by Dabuy02 Tue May 18, 2010 8:30 pm

ayos na to bro..konting brightness lang din sakin and other comments nasabi na ni sir arkiemund... madalian pa to ha.. galing bro..... thumbsup
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Post by bobpen Tue May 18, 2010 8:44 pm

rush pa yan ah! pano na kung take time! kulang lang sa entourage dapat kasi pag commercial matao hindi tahimik. like the rendering. thanks CGP! God bless!





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Post by exodus Wed May 19, 2010 1:03 am

may naalala lang ako nakita ko si mang inasal.
anyway, gaya po ng comment ng iba kulang sa tao.
pwede din lagyan mu ng kunting furniture sa loob kasi mukhang empty.
dami naman po lowpoly na mga tables and chairs at diffuse lang ilagay nyo or color lang wag na lang reflections.
kung maari pakilagay na lang din po ng driver nung car sa kalsada para di mukhang parking yung gitna.
gusto ko design mu sir..galing...
yun lang po master.
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Post by zdesign Wed May 19, 2010 2:02 am

madilim ang scene mo vs sa BG mo,adjust mo rin main facade mo.
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Post by zdesign Wed May 19, 2010 2:02 am

madilim ang scene mo vs sa BG mo,adjust mo rin main facade mo.
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Post by skyscraper100 Wed May 19, 2010 2:16 am

nice render.. sundin lang po ang advices ng masters 2thumbsup
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Post by Invincible Wed May 19, 2010 4:23 am

arkiedmund wrote:ok na ito...things to work on:

1. stretched yung bitmap ng sign boards.
2. camera adjustment, stretched yung view sa 2nd image, sa 1st image parang nagmukhang maliit yung structure.
3. the rest is all good. konting tweak sa compostion is guess, and this will be fine.

Ang yaman mo na ha...

jheteg wrote:konting post production nalang po siguro like brightness, contrast and sharpening. imho lang po.

Dabuy02 wrote:ayos na to bro..konting brightness lang din sakin and other comments nasabi na ni sir arkiemund... madalian pa to ha.. galing bro..... thumbsup

bobpen wrote:rush pa yan ah! pano na kung take time! kulang lang sa entourage dapat kasi pag commercial matao hindi tahimik. like the rendering. thanks CGP! God bless!





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exodus wrote:may naalala lang ako nakita ko si mang inasal.
anyway, gaya po ng comment ng iba kulang sa tao.
pwede din lagyan mu ng kunting furniture sa loob kasi mukhang empty.
dami naman po lowpoly na mga tables and chairs at diffuse lang ilagay nyo or color lang wag na lang reflections.
kung maari pakilagay na lang din po ng driver nung car sa kalsada para di mukhang parking yung gitna.
gusto ko design mu sir..galing...
yun lang po master.

zdesign wrote:madilim ang scene mo vs sa BG mo,adjust mo rin main facade mo.

zdesign wrote:madilim ang scene mo vs sa BG mo,adjust mo rin main facade mo.

skyscraper100 wrote:nice render.. sundin lang po ang advices ng masters 2thumbsup


salamat mga sir. . noted po lahat ng comments
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Post by arki_vhin Wed May 19, 2010 8:16 pm

nice post...bumabanat pa habang nagrereview hehehe....same comment narin sa iba... ung harap bawasan mo ng naka park na car...crowded tignan alisin mo na ung may kamukha...un lang...
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