personal interiors

msta ,masters..post ulit...personal ko po eto...whew,,,linagyan ko nang maraming abobots para masaya !!!!!.,,,hehehe,,well,,meron talaga akong ini - expect na master na magcocment nito...hehheh hop u lyt it guys...
hnay2 lng sa pagtira...

ETO klaro ung segments ng bed,....hahaha

anu pa ba masasabi nmen d2 e perfect na to master...astig k tlga,...i like the 2nd image khit magulo ayos..lalake ang may ari ng kwarto n to noh hhehehe.....ung 2st image d qo gusto dun ung carpet b un?...

salamat po master vhin.... o carpet po un,,hnd po talaga ako makapagrender ng may vray fur,d kaya ng pc ko...e dual lang un....nag eeror na,start pa lang ng render,,kaya ganyan,,huuh,,well,tnx sa comment....

jarul wrote:meron talaga akong ini - expect na master na magcocment nito...hehheh

Ahahaha c the vertex noh?
Take his comments constructively bai... Dont take it against u... sabta lang iyang gsulti, for sure you'll get better with that... i would say he's Brutally Honest!

silvercrown - no probs sir, i did take it constructively, no probs baut that..hehe

maaung pagsugod bai . ahehe. cge lng mn ug post??

hehhe..lagi...oi,hnd pwede bsaya dito...taglog & english pre.sabi master boks.slamt

1st image is best bet for me...
medyo maliit ang golf clubs usually medyo mataas ng unti..
bags too are everwhere.... parang may foursome nasa bahay.. hehehehehe...

overal great stuff...

dickie_ilagan - tnx po..noted po lahat..

kinuha na halos lahat ng abubots ang percentage ng scene mo, 90% evermotion, 10% nlng modelling mo
u got nice lighting and rendering try to minimize the use of ever, do yur own modelling para may personal touch ang scene...

nice work bro.. I like this shot. Hehe. Alm ko bro kung cno expect mo n mgccoment nito.. Sometimes in life. We need to be practical. Ano ang msma kung gmmit k ng evermotion model? Although mrunong o ky nmn ntin imodel.. Ok lng yan bro.. Bst yung cnv ni vertex_wrangler ingat lng s pglgay ng abobot.. Good job bro

boss hinayhinay sa abobot nagiging cluttered ung interior mo. concern ako boss ha. kasi nawawala ung essence ng space and design. imho lang sir. rendering wise is ok. post more

follow mo cnv ni dre pakunat.. The best yan

if you're after realism, you must work out on every area and aspect of rendering... those obvious curve segments makes it more 3d-ish effect, though it might happen in real life if its "PASADYA" and if you cater on more of realistic side, then this must be reviewed again as per picturistic view... we have tutorials here on how to achieve a very nice carpet... on 2nd image, putting "ABUBOTS" is not required actually, personally i like it more simple and accurate of course... then if you're fond of putting those, then you might lessen it a bit... if you're seeking of the vertex, be careful of what you wish for... oh before i forgot, nice lighting anyway...

very good comments from pre erik...constructive comments realy..

pro hwag mung mamasamahin. ok yung render, pero ang gulo nya talaga.. there is no sense of unity in the scene. kung palaging ganito ka magpost bro, i doubt na magmamature ka.

for me even with this post i just could really sense a proud mind and unwillingness to listen to critique. ang ganda nga ng mga critique duon sa last post mo very constructive pro eto mas lalu mo pang dinamihan ng abubots which is far worse than the other... and ill be frank with you the composition is one of the ugliest in the forum.

salamat mga masters,,napagkatuwaan lng nman eto...no probs w crits,i can handle that,,,honestly,no hurt feelings from u guys,matagal nato,wlang mgawa,at napagkatuwaan lng...hnd lhat ng render ko ganyan,imho,i know my self very much,and i know na mature na ako,and i know my own capabilities...well,ok lang po kahit panakapangit pa sa lahat ng pangit tong post kong eto,,,hnd naman talaga ko tulad ng mga sinasabi nyo..hehhe.. peace guys, ganda talaga ng forum nato...
ps.
dont judge the book,(just cover it) ay
dont judge the buk by its cover pala..hehe:buttrock:

nomeradona wrote:pro hwag mung mamasamahin. ok yung render, pero ang gulo nya talaga.. there is no sense of unity in the scene. kung palaging ganito ka magpost bro, i doubt na magmamature ka.

for me even with this post i just could really sense a proud mind and unwillingness to listen to critique. ang ganda nga ng mga critique duon sa last post mo very constructive pro eto mas lalu mo pang dinamihan ng abubots which is far worse than the other... and ill be frank with you the composition is one of the ugliest in the forum.

well said ser nomer...... kakabasa kolang nung last post na sinasabi mo ser...... (penyunu napa yata rugu... )

jarul wrote:salamat mga masters,,napagkatuwaan lng nman eto...no probs w crits,i can handle that,,,honestly,no hurt feelings from u guys,matagal nato,wlang mgawa,at napagkatuwaan lng...hnd lhat ng render ko ganyan,imho,i know my self very much,and i know na mature na ako,and i know my own capabilities...well,ok lang po kahit panakapangit pa sa lahat ng pangit tong post kong eto,,,hnd naman talaga ko tulad ng mga sinasabi nyo..hehhe.. peace guys, ganda talaga ng forum nato...
ps.
dont judge the book,(just cover it) ay
dont judge the buk by its cover pala..hehe:buttrock:

agree ako bro, i know your good in rendering and i could attest it with your various images and rendering before. what i want to point out is this particular image and the previous imges which was shifted in miscellaneous. and you see im pointing herewith is the way you composed the last image. is not your overall character or capability. you must know how to divide two seperate things. based on the sequence of event and based on that last image, its really a far representation of yuor overall capability.

as per your image it was the cover of the book, and im judging the cover... not the overall book.

I've been trying to stay away from your bait - masyado na akong sikat. I do not need more attention :-)


But I cannot help but butt in to correct one misconception:

In this cruel world of visualization, your clients does not care about you. Your clients will only be concerned about how far you can bring their moneys worth. Whether that's a million or just a mere centavo.

Whether you like it or not - you will be judged based on the covers of your book. And your covers better be good. Otherwise you will be torn, destroyed and easily forgotten. That would be such a waste for a talented person like you.

Feel lucky that there's a bunch of people willing to point out the clutter. There was none like this in the dark ages.

And here'S some wisdom I'd like to leave you with, You are only good as your last render!


As for my comments, my previous replies to your other thread pretty sums up the same thing...

tnx to all

kuya jesrael ganda ng pagkarender mo,,, i like d 2nd image,,, comment lang poh kuya cguro mas maganda kng wlang nook bar sa bedroom kc alam ko umiiwas sa mga kalat lalo na foods ang mga bedroom spaces, try to put things in one place para di mukhang maraming abubot ok lang ung medyo marame basta nasa tamang lugar,,, for me lahat ok,,, kuya sometimes to be simple is not boring minsan nga sila ang mas napa2nsin,,, i saw ur some latest render in frendster mga luma nga ang pinopost mo try to post new naman tska i know maganda ang mga render mo at mas marami pa,,, kaya mu yan kuya,,,

ok na to sa akin...hehe keep posting bro...

ok ung 1st image ganda kaso medyo magubat ung background baka may lumabas na lion.. ung second medyo scattered ung mga gamit.. parang d nagliligpit... joke hehehe lighting and color scheme panalo para sakin..

salamt mga masters....