Simple Arabic Housing

Tabing guhit ulet this time sa ibang lahi naman.
First try ko sa traditional housing para sa mga staff ng isang prinsipe dito.
Under study and the final is almost near.


Harap:almost final na...

Likod: sisimplehan ko na siguro

Astig na WIP master ortzak
Modeling galing, I like the design
IMHO, medyo mataas lang siguro ang door knobs
Can't wait the final renders...

whoa. love those masharabiyahs. nice work master ortzak!

Sir Ortzak, sa first image ok na ok na yan..nakuha mo yung traditional design nila dito....sa 2nd view, few comments lang bro...straight mo na lang yung mga poste mo at maglagay ng kaunting base...tama si ser rangalua, ibaba mo na lung door knob mo...gusto ko yun combination ng wood corbels & "mamuni"....IMHO i-dark mo pa yung color ng wood mo....hintayin namin update mo bro...

Very detailed model Sir! Nice lighting on the first image. Most of the comments have been said already but I would like to add some more.

On the first image, the leaves of the palm tree are intersecting with the walls on the right. Rotating or moving the tree would fix this one.

For the 2nd image, palm leaves again pass through the post on the right. There seems to be a gap between the plane that has the grass mat on and the ground.

Edwin wrote:Ay...pasencia na po Sir...first time plang po kc me....sory po...mag thread na lang po ako....maraming salamat po...

Ok lang yun bro, understood na yun.
We will wait for your post,
daming magagandang loob dito na handang magbahagi at tumulong.

Maganda po sir Ortzak... Model is very clean... SU pa rin po ba?...

Pa add; work on the glass reflections... A bit bare...

rangalua wrote:

Edwin wrote:Ay...pasencia na po Sir...first time plang po kc me....sory po...mag thread na lang po ako....maraming salamat po...

Ok lang yun bro, understood na yun.
We will wait for your post,
daming magagandang loob dito na handang magbahagi at tumulong.

Already Edited...

@ Sir Edwin, I have a PM ( Private Message ) for you...pls read and understand.
@ Sir Rangalua, thanks for the reminders

Looks great. Few comments re: the design.

1. I prefer to have a dark wood all over.
2. Remove the perimeter cornice.
3. Little darker on the wall texture..maybe closer to sand red.
4. The baluster design on the back don't feel to be arabic, try mashrabiya (see attached) pattern again alternating with post.


I think that's all.

Floating pala yung grass mo on the back.

rangalua wrote:Astig na WIP master ortzak
Modeling galing, I like the design

IMHO, medyo mataas lang siguro ang door knobs
Can't wait the final renders...

Thanks bro oo nga nag stretch lang kasi ako diko na napansin...will update sooner!!

vinc3nt12 wrote:whoa. love those masharabiyahs. nice work master ortzak!

Thanks bro sa susunod na render ulet dude!

3DZONE wrote:Sir Ortzak, sa first image ok na ok na yan..nakuha mo yung traditional design nila dito....sa 2nd view, few comments lang bro...straight mo na lang yung mga poste mo at maglagay ng kaunting base...tama si ser rangalua, ibaba mo na lung door knob mo...gusto ko yun combination ng wood corbels & "mamuni"....IMHO i-dark mo pa yung color ng wood mo....hintayin namin update mo bro...

Thanks bro sa pagsilip..ginawa ko nga based sa mga render nyo dati at ni sir bizkong gawa ko e....will update soon!

Canadium wrote:Very detailed model Sir! Nice lighting on the first image. Most of the comments have been said already but I would like to add some more.

On the first image, the leaves of the palm tree are intersecting with the walls on the right. Rotating or moving the tree would fix this one.

For the 2nd image, palm leaves again pass through the post on the right. There seems to be a gap between the plane that has the grass mat on and the ground.

Thanks CAnadium sa comments..will update with Palm now kaka DL lang hehe..

rangalua wrote:

Edwin wrote:Ay...pasencia na po Sir...first time plang po kc me....sory po...mag thread na lang po ako....maraming salamat po...

Ok lang yun bro, understood na yun.
We will wait for your post,
daming magagandang loob dito na handang magbahagi at tumulong.

Thanks na din sa pagsalo hehe..

cloud20 wrote:Maganda po sir Ortzak... Model is very clean... SU pa rin po ba?...

As Usual SU Sir Cloud..

Pa add; work on the glass reflections... A bit bare...

Noted yan sir wala pa ako mapili reflection scene e..

3DZONE wrote:

rangalua wrote:

Edwin wrote:Ay...pasencia na po Sir...first time plang po kc me....sory po...mag thread na lang po ako....maraming salamat po...

Ok lang yun bro, understood na yun.
We will wait for your post,
daming magagandang loob dito na handang magbahagi at tumulong.

Already Edited...

@ Sir Edwin, I have a PM ( Private Message ) for you...pls read and understand.
@ Sir Rangalua, thanks for the reminders

kurdaps! wrote:Looks great. Few comments re: the design.

1. I prefer to have a dark wood all over.
2. Remove the perimeter cornice.
3. Little darker on the wall texture..maybe closer to sand red.
4. The baluster design on the back don't feel to be arabic, try mashrabiya (see attached) pattern again alternating with post.


I think that's all.

Floating pala yung grass mo on the back.

Thanks sir sa suggestions medyo pinasimplehan lang ang likod..wala na balluster at maliit na trellis...value engineering...

Noted sa grass...boundary line na kasi yan hehe...limited space sa likod..

Help is greatly appreciated mga Sir