Hill Top Res. etc.
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Hill Top Res. etc.
Hillo po mga bossing..post ko po ito..
Hindi pa po ito tapos may rear view pa po..
front view po natapos..(honestly po nahihirapan po ako sa slope slope)
DAY SCENE
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NIGHT SCENE
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MACKOY INTERNET CAFE (signage not final)
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singit ko lang po ito..render lang po
VIEW SPOT 1
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MANG INASAL
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PRITONG MANOK
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c & c are very welcome..
maraming salamat po sa dumaan
Hindi pa po ito tapos may rear view pa po..
front view po natapos..(honestly po nahihirapan po ako sa slope slope)
DAY SCENE
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NIGHT SCENE
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MACKOY INTERNET CAFE (signage not final)
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singit ko lang po ito..render lang po
VIEW SPOT 1
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MANG INASAL
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PRITONG MANOK
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c & c are very welcome..
maraming salamat po sa dumaan
Re: Hill Top Res. etc.
lahat d best
renren- CGP Apprentice
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Age : 37
Location : taguig
Registration date : 28/03/2010
Re: Hill Top Res. etc.
daming bird sir
renren- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 456
Age : 37
Location : taguig
Registration date : 28/03/2010
Re: Hill Top Res. etc.
Nice images bro,. I like 1st & 3rd shot. Tska andami birds heheh mapupuno nang pupu roof mo heh ...
Ernest- CGP Apprentice
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Age : 41
Location : Quezon City
Registration date : 20/02/2010
Re: Hill Top Res. etc.
Very nice renders Sir! First image is really great! The only minor comment is not related to the design or rendering. It is only on the detail of the curb & gutter and sidewalk. They do not seem to have the right dimensions. You can use this as reference: ftp://ftp.odot.state.or.us/techserv/roadway/web_drawings/roadway/rev_01/rd700.pdf
For the second image, I think it's better to have the glare taken off the lights. It looks so cg.
The 3rd image is great. The only thing is, if you can add some lights inside the net cafe. It looks pretty dark inside.
The 4th image is simply awesome.
The bump on the floor on the 5th image seems too much for my taste.
Those bowls of hot soup on the tables on the last image do not have any shadows on the table considering there are bright lights directly above them.
For the second image, I think it's better to have the glare taken off the lights. It looks so cg.
The 3rd image is great. The only thing is, if you can add some lights inside the net cafe. It looks pretty dark inside.
The 4th image is simply awesome.
The bump on the floor on the 5th image seems too much for my taste.
Those bowls of hot soup on the tables on the last image do not have any shadows on the table considering there are bright lights directly above them.
Last edited by Canadium on Thu May 06, 2010 11:16 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : typo)
Re: Hill Top Res. etc.
first two images -ung first one sir konti pa sikat ng araw. para kasing liwanag lang ng buwan yung day scene nyo. pa-warm po ng konti sunlight/whole image.tapos yung road sir nabanat yung materials. pabawas na din po mga birds, iba na po dating sa sobra dami. second po, yung night scene parang kumisap lahat ng pinlights. yun lang naman po e sa observation ko. ok naman po lahat at ang galing! looks real. sana sir ganyan na din ako mag-render / gumawa para dami clients di ako makasingil ng mahal dito dami kasi kalaban. tapos magaganda din gawa nila. kaya 500 per render lang singil ko.
eragasco- CGP Apprentice
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Age : 38
Location : Cabanatuan City
Registration date : 07/07/2009
Re: Hill Top Res. etc.
sir pinaka gusto ko yung mackoy internet cafe mo. akala ko totoo yun. sa bike ko lang halata. kasi wala basket. hehehe. biro lang. the best!
eragasco- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 470
Age : 38
Location : Cabanatuan City
Registration date : 07/07/2009
Re: Hill Top Res. etc.
dami ah....
1st image.
- grass looks flat.displacemnt siguro
- bawasan ung mga birds..distracting talaga
- something wrong w/ the model. lalo na sa ramp up area at sa sidewalk
- nag color bleed po yung green
- stretch ung map sa road
2nd image
- too noisy
- nagtataka lng ako dun sa carport area,parang may mga mga box..ung tipong hndi pa natapos ang render...
3rd image
- lagay ka nalang siguro ng lights sa loob..since naka focus ka naman space na yan..
4th image
- curtain..ibahin nlng cguro..mas ok kung plane lng
- noisy
5th image
- noisy
- bump sa floor,napasobra
- i think hindi ganito ang chair sa mag inasal..
- mapping ng wood lalo na sa mga chairs
6th
- image is too sharp
- too much of that usok
- floor..add bump
- ano yung box na nasa counter? yung mat bilog na puti?
- mapping ng wood sa mga table.pls check..at magaspang ung mga sides.
1st image.
- grass looks flat.displacemnt siguro
- bawasan ung mga birds..distracting talaga
- something wrong w/ the model. lalo na sa ramp up area at sa sidewalk
- nag color bleed po yung green
- stretch ung map sa road
2nd image
- too noisy
- nagtataka lng ako dun sa carport area,parang may mga mga box..ung tipong hndi pa natapos ang render...
3rd image
- lagay ka nalang siguro ng lights sa loob..since naka focus ka naman space na yan..
4th image
- curtain..ibahin nlng cguro..mas ok kung plane lng
- noisy
5th image
- noisy
- bump sa floor,napasobra
- i think hindi ganito ang chair sa mag inasal..
- mapping ng wood lalo na sa mga chairs
6th
- image is too sharp
- too much of that usok
- floor..add bump
- ano yung box na nasa counter? yung mat bilog na puti?
- mapping ng wood sa mga table.pls check..at magaspang ung mga sides.
Re: Hill Top Res. etc.
ui master marvin, daming raket ah... yaman na tlga.hahaha..
nasabi na ni master ja ang comments. kaya pala malate sa klase, kasi daming hinahabol.hahaha
nasabi na ni master ja ang comments. kaya pala malate sa klase, kasi daming hinahabol.hahaha
Re: Hill Top Res. etc.
galing nito sir ah,nice one
one9dew- CGP Apprentice
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Re: Hill Top Res. etc.
oy salamat po mga bossing..pm kita sir ortzak if my time ako..
salamat po sa inyong lahat..maraming maraming salamat po..
@jarul salamat master..pag may time ako update ko..salamat master your the best
salamat po sa inyong lahat..maraming maraming salamat po..
@jarul salamat master..pag may time ako update ko..salamat master your the best
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