vray first render

Hello mga masters sir/mam hingi lang po ng comment first render ko lang po ito sa vray 1.5 for 3ds max 2009 c&c lang po para maimprove ko pa ano pa kayang kulang sa rendering ko...?maraming salamat mga masters GODbless sa lahat.

halos ok naman na ang mga renders, just work now on mapping and models scales.

first image - wooden planks size and size of some models
third and 4th image - tile grout size, too prominent

wow ganda nito master parang gusto ko nang mag max ah,lupet ng mga output pati mga dloads ,galing

-nice work sir!

oy not bad
-mapping nalang sir

nice one..not bad for starters...galing...

good start!

nice one...thats a good start....keep practicing

galing sir, master to be..

render master wrote:halos ok naman na ang mga renders, just work now on mapping and models scales.

first image - wooden planks size and size of some models
third and 4th image - tile grout size, too prominent

one9dew wrote:wow ganda nito master parang gusto ko nang mag max ah,lupet ng mga output pati mga dloads ,galing

deosrock wrote:-nice work sir!

LadiesMan217 wrote:oy not bad
-mapping nalang sir

knives seiji kun wrote:nice one..not bad for starters...galing...

lightfoot wrote:good start!

exodus wrote:nice one...thats a good start....keep practicing

keitzkoy wrote:galing sir, master to be..

tenk u mga bossing sa pagdaan salamat sa comment try ko pa iadjust ayon sa mga suggestions nyo, gagaling ng mga tao dito sa CGP kakainspired mabuhay ang CGP!

Galing ng render sir
- comment ko lng sir para kc lumatang yung bed sa second image siguro kulang ng shadow yun lng naman sir overall ok na

Comments has been posted,
Nice design & renders sir
Keep it up & post more bro

comgrapart wrote:Galing ng render sir
- comment ko lng sir para kc lumatang yung bed sa second image siguro kulang ng shadow yun lng naman sir overall ok na

Ganun ba sir nakapatong kasi sa flying carpet hehe joke!totoo nyan nkaangat talaga yan ibinaba ko kasi yung buong room sa level 0 e nakalimutan ko yatang ibaba din yan together with other objects ngayon ko nga lang din napansin hehe, thanks sa comment check ko yung model.

Nice start Sir! Aside from the other comments already mentioned, pwede mo rin try ang mga ito:
1. two point perspective para sa mga scenes mo with different pov.
2. take out those 'spikes' sa bed. They look dangerous.
3. And also try using other furniture choices para sa living room. Right now those couches don't look comfy to relax on.

Canadium wrote:Nice start Sir! Aside from the other comments already mentioned, pwede mo rin try ang mga ito:
1. two point perspective para sa mga scenes mo with different pov.
2. take out those 'spikes' sa bed. They look dangerous.
3. And also try using other furniture choices para sa living room. Right now those couches don't look comfy to relax on.

nice comment sir sensya na edyo ginagamay ko din first time ko gamit ng vraycam edyo unusual din kasing ayusin hnd gaya ng normal cam khit nakaperspective ka konting ikot tapos ctrl+c ayun na ang camera but i'll work for that sir, oo nga e tinamad na kasi akong tanggalin yung spike hehe update ko na lang ito thanks ng marami sa direct comment i need that sir to counter check the elements in my drawing.