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Post by archie.l Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:57 pm

good day po mga cgp members and masters,, second post ko po,, dati parin po gamit ko 3dmax+vray+ps, first try ko po ng hdri,, paki cc nalang po,, ^^
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Post by owenski Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:55 pm

nice rendering sir! looks pretty real to me,IMHO cguro try to make the structure the focus of the scene, try to attain a better angle, masyado atang overwhelming ang foliage...

rotate and rescale mo sir ibang bushes para hindi nagmumukang parepareho...

tweaks pa sir sa grass... try mo vray fur or hair&fur...


keep it up sir! peace man
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Post by alwin Tue Mar 30, 2010 9:44 pm

my comments & suggestions:
cam height for mans eye from 1.3m-1.5m filipino height
move your cam closer
try another view would be an option
familiarize with the bump & displacement process to improve your grass & other texture manipulation
be careful enough to place the cars, can cause & create special attention on your presentations
the bg looks stretch
follow the above mentioned comments plus owenski comments can help your rendering problem!
waiting for an update!
for more references try to search here, theres a lot of tuturials can be found!
good luck! 2thumbsup
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Post by archie.l Tue Mar 30, 2010 10:26 pm

tnx somuch for the comments,, praktis ulit,, tnx sa pagdalaw
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Post by effreymm Tue Mar 30, 2010 10:30 pm

Nice one sir. Post more
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Post by archie.l Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:35 am

tnx po sir
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Post by rccboinks Wed Mar 31, 2010 6:12 am

nice rendering sya..pero lets wait narin sa ating mga masters para sa comments nila...we need their comments for our improvement..more post pa po sir!!! God bless always!!!
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Post by fpj999 Wed Mar 31, 2010 6:31 am

maganda rendering Very Happy
mapping lang ng road saka yung bushes pare pareho lang try rotating para hindi sila maging magkakamuka Very Happy
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Post by arch.balangatan Wed Mar 31, 2010 12:32 pm

nice rendering sir, i like the sky environment.imho lang sir, natabunan ng puno ang structure mo, medyo limit ng konti po...
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Post by archie.l Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:17 pm

tnx po mga sir,, noted po mga comment nyo,,nasubrahan ko rin po ata scale ng puno ko,, salamat po sa mga comment,, astig talaga dito sa cgp
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