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Post by ichi Sun Mar 28, 2010 6:20 pm

this is my first render post. feel free to critic po. im still a bit not satisfied with it. pano po ba yun trees? it doesnt look real sa kin kasi. need help with it. and about the lighting. ok na po ba? and the overall. pls let me know kung ano pa pong kulang. thank you.. Very Happy Smile thumbsup
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Post by 3DZONE Sun Mar 28, 2010 10:25 pm

good job....any other view mam ichi??...try mong reduce yung reflection ng Branch ng mga trees mo but overall 2thumbsup
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Post by Invincible Sun Mar 28, 2010 10:55 pm

not bad mam. . . konti post production na lang po sa photoshop lighting will do!
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Post by zildian_nico Sun Mar 28, 2010 11:16 pm

nice for first post...practice lang maam....keep posting... thumbsup
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Post by exodus Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:45 am

clean render...galing.....
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Post by one9dew Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:25 am

nice render maam itchy,post more view 2thumbsup
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Post by benj.arki Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:37 am

wohoho mganda nmn pla maam e. cguro sa akin is camera angle lng. the rest ok na! 2thumbsup
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Post by yaug_03 Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:44 am

Not bad. Konting laro na lang sa PS to. Good job thumbsup
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Post by Ernest Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:51 am

Nice render, a have some comments
1.camera angle mas ok siguro kung taas nang konti para perfect straight vertically
2.Bumps on materials specially on walls.
3.Post pro sa PS.
Very Happy
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Post by ortzak Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:54 am

Very nice start po..
nasabi na nila lahat..

nice view approach 2thumbsup
cam settings..


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Post by ichi Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:51 pm

thank you po.. Surprised Surprised Surprised what should i do in post production po ba? what should i add? Smile Smile Smile
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Post by Canadium Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:31 pm

Nice start mam ichi! Kahit first time lang, great work na agad. Keep it up!
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Post by kieko Mon Mar 29, 2010 6:28 pm

wow heto npla ung fruit of the help line..hehe..joke..
rendering and composition wala masabi ang galing...
imho lang po sa design nung structure..para kasing napagiwanan sa design ng building sa mga waiting shed..
mas kapansin pansin kasi ung details ng waiting shed compare sa main building..

Goodluck and Godbless
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Post by effreymm Mon Mar 29, 2010 10:06 pm

Nice practice maam, konting adjust pa sa cam vertical shift.
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Post by V2Rockets Tue Mar 30, 2010 12:34 am

Ernest wrote:Nice render, a have some comments
1.camera angle mas ok siguro kung taas nang konti para perfect straight vertically

meron ka nabang nakitang perfect straight vertical sa totoong buhay???
its good for interior but for exterior???? ah,,ah,,, i dont think so dude,,

@ichi nice post jagged edges lang sakin,,,malaki siguro original image size nyan no???keep it up

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Post by pakunat Tue Mar 30, 2010 12:41 am

ayon oh. daming boys. hahaha.

keep it up mam. malulupit yang mga yan lalo na si invincible. paturo ka sa kanya
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Post by Ernest Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:34 am

V2Rockets wrote:
Ernest wrote:Nice render, a have some comments
1.camera angle mas ok siguro kung taas nang konti para perfect straight vertically

meron ka nabang nakitang perfect straight vertical sa totoong buhay???
its good for interior but for exterior???? ah,,ah,,, i dont think so dude,,

@ichi nice post jagged edges lang sakin,,,malaki siguro original image size nyan no???keep it up

I think maraming perfect straight vertical bro, di lang naman magiging perfect vertical ang isang object or structure kung sinadyang lagyan nang angle..IMHO lang naman. Chill bro peace man

Sample camera angle with straight vertical lines.
http://www.cgpinoy.org/architectural-f3/_single-storey_-t10068.htm
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Post by ichi Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:13 am

kieko wrote:wow heto npla ung fruit of the help line..hehe..joke..
rendering and composition wala masabi ang galing...
imho lang po sa design nung structure..para kasing napagiwanan sa design ng building sa mga waiting shed..
mas kapansin pansin kasi ung details ng waiting shed compare sa main building..

Goodluck and Godbless

haha! honestly ang laking tulong dito sa cgp helpline. thanks to you people. thumbsup about the design, yan talaga yun design na binigay sa kin. i wish i could redesign it kung pwede lang. thank you for the appreciation. thumbsup Very Happy Smile
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Post by ichi Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:22 am

Ernest wrote:
V2Rockets wrote:
Ernest wrote:Nice render, a have some comments
1.camera angle mas ok siguro kung taas nang konti para perfect straight vertically

meron ka nabang nakitang perfect straight vertical sa totoong buhay???
its good for interior but for exterior???? ah,,ah,,, i dont think so dude,,

@ichi nice post jagged edges lang sakin,,,malaki siguro original image size nyan no???keep it up

I think maraming perfect straight vertical bro, di lang naman magiging perfect vertical ang isang object or structure kung sinadyang lagyan nang angle..IMHO lang naman. Chill bro peace man

Sample camera angle with straight vertical lines.
http://www.cgpinoy.org/architectural-f3/_single-storey_-t10068.htm

thank you for the critic. im still not good on taking camera angles. thats why ive asked on my other topic (kung nabasa nyo) on how to take perfect exterior angles. but based on what i've heard architectural presentations should show that vertical lines be at 90 degrees. Smile
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Post by anthony_als Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:58 am

ah eto pala un iniinquire last time, ang katunayan magaling for first time maam, good job Very Happy kaso medyo madilim dito sa monitor, not sure kung dito o sa image, try cheking it po, keep it up, learn more from CGP, goo luck Very Happy
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Post by graint Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:19 am

Ganda ng gawa mo! Galing mo!
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Post by deosrock Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:35 am

-nice start mam, galing mo na! 2thumbsup
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Post by Dhyon'D'Man Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:09 am

Galing nito mam, cam nalng kulang nito ayos na
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Post by Archi.Karl Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:26 am

Galing po nito mam! Smile
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Post by pakunat Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:48 pm

Ernest wrote:Nice render, a have some comments
1.camera angle mas ok siguro kung taas nang konti para perfect straight vertically
2.Bumps on materials specially on walls.
3.Post pro sa PS.
Very Happy

sir joke lang ito. OT pa. heehhhe
my question lang ako. dun ba sa avatar nya ung comment mo? hihihi
kidding lang
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