Jubilee Church - Richard Meier

Hi guys, just want to share something i did yesterday afternoon at around 4-6pm.
original photo at the right side, mine's at the left side.
Single photo for reference, kaya single view lang cya hehe... c&c's very much welcome. thanks guys.

naks naman bro.....ito yung isa sa trip kong church na gawa ni richard meier e!!!more pa!!!

nice design, meier is one of the current great designers. if you copied the model based solely on this picture, that's a feat

BUT i have some pointers in your render though:

1. the modelling of the curve is not 100% smooth - towards the base, mejo di na continuous ung arc.
2. too overbright in the center - what's more, your sky is also overbright in that area, which causes a bit of glare.
3. you need to work on your masking.. it's a bit obvious.

it's a nice model to practice with sir, hope to see some updates.

f-fortyone wrote:naks naman bro.....ito yung isa sa trip kong church na gawa ni richard meier e!!!more pa!!!

thanks sir.

mushroom wrote:nice design, meier is one of the current great designers. if you copied the model based solely on this picture, that's a feat

BUT i have some pointers in your render though:

1. the modelling of the curve is not 100% smooth - towards the base, mejo di na continuous ung arc.
2. too overbright in the center - what's more, your sky is also overbright in that area, which causes a bit of glare.
3. you need to work on your masking.. it's a bit obvious.

it's a nice model to practice with sir, hope to see some updates.

thanks for the comments. yep i just copied the model of the building with just that one picture reference. nothing more sir. didnt even put the picture in the viewport background,