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Post by Guest Thu Jan 14, 2010 9:52 am

di pa to tapos dadagdagan ko pa ng ulap at detalye yung tubig at tamang shadows at laro ng lighting,lalagyan ko sana ng mga lumulutang na debris pero mukhang mali yun kasi nagtingin akong mga plane crash sa net wala namang mga lumulutang, siguro depende na din sa damage ng nagcrash,tsaka di namn yun permanenteng lulutang sa scene, hahaha masyado kong pinoproblema.saka nalang pag sinipag
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Post by rangalua Thu Jan 14, 2010 9:58 am

Very nice sir, ganda ng dramatic scene 2thumbsup
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Post by eyecon01 Fri Jan 15, 2010 1:04 am

I like it bro! Wag mu nang dagdagan yung clouds... mas maganda ata pag ganito. Less is more Smile

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Post by v_wrangler Fri Jan 15, 2010 1:34 am

Something you might want to consider if you decide to do a remake:

By looking at the low position of the sun, I'd expect something like back lighting where anything parallel to the camera will be under a shade and the silhouttes of the rocks will be more prominent from the lighting.

If you bring the light source a bit to the right, then you've got a good light and shadow match on the rocks in the left.

The water doesn't look like water (they look like smoke or dry ice) perhaps because of the lack of rflections and highlights. Right now they look like murky water surface and waves photographed under long exposure.

I'd love to see this with a distorted lens...
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Post by Guest Fri Jan 15, 2010 1:54 am

rangalua - salamat po sir ,sobrang di pa ko masaya dito.
eyecon01 - master icon thank you po sa tip. "less is more"
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v_wrangler - salamat po sir, ngayon ko lang napansin yung karamihan sa mga nasabi mo, thank you. 2thumbsup

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Post by corpsegrinder Tue Jan 19, 2010 4:08 am

astig ito bro! thumbsup
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Post by dreffyves3d Tue Jan 19, 2010 4:24 am

grabeh ang galing... hippie
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Post by LadiesMan217 Tue Jan 19, 2010 4:38 am

ganda lalo na pag nalagyan mo ng ulap thumbsup
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Post by Guest Tue Jan 19, 2010 7:32 am

@corpsegrinder -salamat sir,
@dreffyves3d -thank you boss
@LadiesMan217- maraming salamat, nitry ko lagyan ng ulap, pero tama si sir eyecon01 mas ok na simple ang langit .
naeexcite na kong ayusin to, para makagawa ng bago.

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Post by marcelinoiii Sun Jan 24, 2010 8:39 pm

ang galing mo pre... very promising mga works mo... pro level! 2thumbsup
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Post by Allan Amor Sun Jan 24, 2010 8:51 pm

galing ng scene... 2thumbsup
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Post by ymhon Mon Jan 25, 2010 4:39 am

this is nice thumbsup
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Post by fpj999 Mon Jan 25, 2010 9:54 pm

GANDA ^^

master 3D ba to lahat o may halong picture Very Happy wala akong idea kung pano nagawa to e buttrock
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Post by celes Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:34 pm

v_wrangler wrote:Right now they look like murky water surface and waves photographed under long exposure.

indeed, and it's not a bad effect. great scene you got here pressure thumbsup
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Post by Guest Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:09 pm

marcelinoiii - salamat uli sir,

Allan Amor - tnx boss.

ymhon - salamat pre, nagmamatte painting ka na din ha, asteg.

fpj999 - mix po ng 3d, digi paint, at photo manips, karamihan ng andiyan pics.

mushroom- salamat boss ganun talaga yung tubig.

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Post by Jeff MD Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:24 pm

at first look without reading your descripton akala ko they on top of the mountains.

this has potential, you need to push this more. This could pass for a concept art, but not for a mattepainting.

A good tip is to use this and start over from this idea fresh from scratch. make it more photo real and and avoid using so much obvious brush strokes. I see alot of cloning with your rocks there, avoid that too. lastly check your black levels, nawawala ang sense of depth if di mo nasunod ito. check your photoshop black to white swatches, thats the best guide to using black for the nearest one to almost 10-20% grey sa pinakamalayo.

keep painting bro.
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Post by Guest Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:45 am

Jeff MD wrote:at first look without reading your descripton akala ko they on top of the mountains.

this has potential, you need to push this more. This could pass for a concept art, but not for a mattepainting.

A good tip is to use this and start over from this idea fresh from scratch. make it more photo real and and avoid using so much obvious brush strokes. I see alot of cloning with your rocks there, avoid that too. lastly check your black levels, nawawala ang sense of depth if di mo nasunod ito. check your photoshop black to white swatches, thats the best guide to using black for the nearest one to almost 10-20% grey sa pinakamalayo.

keep painting bro.


salamat po Sir Jeff mas kailangan ng members ng forum na to yung mga pagpuna ng gaya ng binibigay mo. tatandaan ko yang mga sinabi mo,karamihan kasi dito ngayon nahihiya magsabi ng nakikita nilang kulang sa work ng kasama nila,
salamat sir,

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Post by zdesign Sun May 09, 2010 6:10 am

galing!
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Post by maq1226 Sun May 09, 2010 10:29 pm

Sir anu pong software yan?
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Post by seanmaximus Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:21 am

great work bro! nice observation Jeff MD:D let's raise the bar!
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Post by PATSARTSTUDIOS Thu May 05, 2011 3:40 am

LUPIT! 2thumbsup
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Post by eyecon01 Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:59 am

great work man
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