A Two Storey Residence (Added View)

Mga sir... share ko lang etong latest ko... not my design... model ko lang nung nasa dubai pa ako... ngaun ko lang din narender... comment lang po mga sir... TIA

Day Scene


Second image has been deleted....!

Added view.... experiment namn on knoll! practice lang mga sir...!

2nd image..feeling ko may shades ako ahh

sir ang ganda ng rendering mo...lupet,,

Ganda po ng pagkaka render sir at malinis...mas okay sa akin ang 1st image kasi sa second parang feeling ko naman Doomsday

well done,,,

galing mo dude stryker.2nd image prang nasa mars.cool!

vray nice sir..

pwede

oy ganda nito ...
yung car lang sa right medyo malaki yata scale?

Perfect lighting Sir. Galing!

nice one stryker, specially the first image.

My comments.

The gaps between the dark and the lights are so stiff. You need to preserve the illumination even in the dark areas. Remember that there isn't a black shadow in reality unless you are in total darkness. One thing I could suggest is to consider LWF in your next renders. But hey, its like opening up a new can of worms.

Simply put, the contrast is too high for the first image, try to eliminate the blacks in the shade by either using LWF or lowering the density of the shadow or adding more negative light to suck the darkness out.

As for the second image, it's unfortunately unnatural. Its like there's a big fire happening in front of the area. If you want a late afternoon look, it might help to use a blue ambience (environment) and a yellowish or orangish direct light.

Nice to see your work again.

LadiesMan217 wrote:2nd image..feeling ko may shades ako ahh

Thanks sir... just an PS experimental view...!

markitekdesign wrote:sir ang ganda ng rendering mo...lupet,,

Thank din sir...! d naman...! still learning...!

Leslie Adona wrote:Ganda po ng pagkaka render sir at malinis...mas okay sa akin ang 1st image kasi sa second parang feeling ko naman Doomsday

Doomsday ba...! mejo hesitant nga ako i-post yan e... experiment lang and nakatuwaan sa PS...! anyways thanks po mam s pagbisita...!

scorpion21 wrote:well done,,,

Thanks din sir...!

balongeisler wrote:galing mo dude stryker.2nd image prang nasa mars.cool!

Hindi naman sir... uu nga no... mars ung ambience....! hahaha! anyways thanks for dropping by...!

arkitrix wrote:vray nice sir..

ok un a.. VRAY nice?! heheheh... thanks sir...!

ONCIRE wrote:pwede

Thank You!

nheil29 wrote:oy ganda nito ...
yung car lang sa right medyo malaki yata scale?

I'll check the scale sir... thanks for dropping by..!

ArchiNox wrote:Perfect lighting Sir. Galing!

Thanks din sir... still working on lighting settings ang mats....!

v_wrangler wrote:nice one stryker, specially the first image.

My comments.

The gaps between the dark and the lights are so stiff. You need to preserve the illumination even in the dark areas. Remember that there isn't a black shadow in reality unless you are in total darkness. One thing I could suggest is to consider LWF in your next renders. But hey, its like opening up a new can of worms.

Simply put, the contrast is too high for the first image, try to eliminate the blacks in the shade by either using LWF or lowering the density of the shadow or adding more negative light to suck the darkness out.

As for the second image, it's unfortunately unnatural. Its like there's a big fire happening in front of the area. If you want a late afternoon look, it might help to use a blue ambience (environment) and a yellowish or orangish direct light.

Nice to see your work again.

Thank you sir V....! Actually sir.. nilagyan ko kasi ng vray dirt pass sa PS....! base on SIr bokkins Vray Dirt Tuts....! napalakas lang siguro... anyways thanks for the pointers...! also on the LWF... aralin ko n lang....

for the second image... salamt sir...! hesitant talaga ako ipost ito... pero as i've said.. all are PS experiments... just learning on the color balance and exposures...!

Again, thanks!

take sir verts comments, 1st image for me looks good... but dont know what you did on the 2nd,??? or try to experiment more on the color balancing til you get the desired ambiance... goodluck and good job

first image for me

sir nagapply kaba ng occlusion pass dito? ,kaunting adjustment pa sa brightness and contrast, in terms of modelling and post modern designing i can say its good

wah hehehe...nagpost din hehhee...ayos na ayos ito sir.ok naman experiment mo sa PS hehe,...

imho lang parang sikip nung mga car nice render

nice work sir especially the 1st image, nice modeling and render...

ERICK wrote:take sir verts comments, 1st image for me looks good... but dont know what you did on the 2nd,??? or try to experiment more on the color balancing til you get the desired ambiance... goodluck and good job

take note ko na sir...! especially the LWF part....! maybe update ko na lang ung post ko sir...! try ko pa laruin ung color balance on PS... anyways thanks sir... laking help nung tuts mo...!

ar_rimuej wrote:first image for me

Thank you sir at nagustuhan mo...!

Nico.Patdu wrote:sir nagapply kaba ng occlusion pass dito? ,kaunting adjustment pa sa brightness and contrast, in terms of modelling and post modern designing i can say its good

yup sir may occlusion pass yan... mejo napadilim lang cguro ng onti.. or maybe i try to calibrate my LCD... it looks all natural sa LCD ko s haws... pero dito s ibang Monitor a bit dark sya....! anyways thanks sir...

Good one Archt. Stryker!!!
Ang ganda pakarender ng 1st image..

arki_vhin wrote:wah hehehe...nagpost din hehhee...ayos na ayos ito sir.ok naman experiment mo sa PS hehe,...

uu nga pre... busy kasi sa opis kaya natagalan post... kinalawang tuloy... anyways thanks sir...!

icefrik19 wrote:imho lang parang sikip nung mga car nice render

noted sir... thanks

corpsegrinder wrote:nice work sir especially the 1st image, nice modeling and render...

thank you sir... all CAD modeling yan sir... thanks sa pagdaan....!

jeb_uap wrote:Good one Archt. Stryker!!!
Ang ganda pakarender ng 1st image..

Thank you sir!

OT: anong chapter ka sir?!

maganda ang first image

v_wrangler wrote:nice one stryker, specially the first image.

My comments.

The gaps between the dark and the lights are so stiff. You need to preserve the illumination even in the dark areas. Remember that there isn't a black shadow in reality unless you are in total darkness. One thing I could suggest is to consider LWF in your next renders. But hey, its like opening up a new can of worms.

Simply put, the contrast is too high for the first image, try to eliminate the blacks in the shade by either using LWF or lowering the density of the shadow or adding more negative light to suck the darkness out.

As for the second image, it's unfortunately unnatural. Its like there's a big fire happening in front of the area. If you want a late afternoon look, it might help to use a blue ambience (environment) and a yellowish or orangish direct light.

Nice to see your work again.

What's the LWF?

I think you can easily adjust the dynamic range in PS especially if you are using Vrimg since it is in a higher bit of image.

In contrary to what Wrangler said about the stiffness of the B&W I think it is just a matter of preference. And also in photography, some of the areas will have to be compromised because you can't save all the details unless you use HDR or Photo blending which will result to again an unnatural look.

Ok now about the work. Rendering is great and the composition is conservative. You can improve the bump of your tile and the material in your road. The black car is.. yes, out of scale. Is your entry porch a bit narrow or it's just the angle of the view. Overall good job.

Cheers!

All comments have been made. The first image is nice. I couldn't say the same for the second.
Thanks for sharing.

very good render sir,,, maganda din ang design,,, tweak na lng sa level or brightness n contrast sa ps,,, but overall ok n ok sir!!! keep posting~!!!