Juno

The lonely bride

The revision

hmmm.. is this a mixture of Japanese and Chinese artworks???
nice concept.. though.. a bit cluttered IMO

KettleRenderer wrote:hmmm.. is this a mixture of Japanese and Chinese artworks???
nice concept.. though.. a bit cluttered IMO

Thanks for the comment. I admit Sir, medyo hinde pa ako marunong mag positioning ng mga elements sa design, sabi nga ng iba kong kasama, cluttered/crowded daw akong gumawa.

About the jap and chi artworks, hinde ko alam eh, kasi naisip ko lang yan, the scripts are from KANJI though so more of a jap elements.

Thanks again.

u improved alot man...
walis pa...i hope u kno wat i mean...praktis pa ng mdami pra marami kang mapost...congrats... :

maganda naman ang composition...sobrang daming colors lng cguro ginamit mo IMO. can you try two to three colors lang and let's see how it looks? parang maganda yata more of white and red...subok lng hehe

ie wrote:u improved alot man...
walis pa...i hope u kno wat i mean...praktis pa ng mdami pra marami kang mapost...congrats... :

Uy thanks, Yep- nag-practice po ako lagi pag may free time. Thanks for the tap! will practice more.

CHIken RUN wrote:maganda naman ang composition...sobrang daming colors lng cguro ginamit mo IMO. can you try two to three colors lang and let's see how it looks? parang maganda yata more of white and red...subok lng hehe

Thanks for the comment Sir, Will try a few set of colors pag natapos ko po load ko. Thanks Thanks

yes its a bit cluttered, but like you said nag prapractice kapa so ok lng keep on making good art dude, so far its not bad naman, it quite ok actually

CHIken RUN wrote:maganda naman ang composition...sobrang daming colors lng cguro ginamit mo IMO. can you try two to three colors lang and let's see how it looks? parang maganda yata more of white and red...subok lng hehe

white and red is very Chinese. .. since he already used KANJI .. then he should go all the way Japanese. darken the NEON bamboo image. make it more BAMBOO ...

great...ganda nito sir,,,

cool ang dating......paturo naman.hehehehe.

looks good..but you can still improve...
cguro, i-polish mo pa ung bamboo leaves mo and ung sun...para lumutang ung girl...kc masyadong ngmix ung colors...maybe you should emphasize the lady more..kya medyo magaan lng dpat ung color mo sa background..gets?

pero astig...ok cia..good start

KettleRenderer wrote:

CHIken RUN wrote:maganda naman ang composition...sobrang daming colors lng cguro ginamit mo IMO. can you try two to three colors lang and let's see how it looks? parang maganda yata more of white and red...subok lng hehe

white and red is very Chinese. .. since he already used KANJI .. then he should go all the way Japanese. darken the NEON bamboo image. make it more BAMBOO ...

Thanks for the insights, This is a good learning for me. I will more emphasize the bamboo and will do some revisions. thanks for the help. this will help me improve.

mailman wrote:great...ganda nito sir,,,

Thank you po, I will upload another copy of this po.

balongeisler wrote:cool ang dating......paturo naman.hehehehe.

Thank you po, still on my learning stage po. hehe.

rica wrote:looks good..but you can still improve...
cguro, i-polish mo pa ung bamboo leaves mo and ung sun...para lumutang ung girl...kc masyadong ngmix ung colors...maybe you should emphasize the lady more..kya medyo magaan lng dpat ung color mo sa background..gets?

pero astig...ok cia..good start

Thank you, Thanks for the comment and input (will try that), gumagawa na po ako ng bamboo trees, will upload soon.