revision

mam, sir, post ko lang po itong revision sa isang store sa dubai mall, my participation is change the 3dmodel based on the revised layout and add my own way of render.

done in max2009 32bit (win vista business OS, HP xw8600 workstation, 20min, medium setting, 800x600pxl, 300dpi), vray sp2 demo, cs3, hope you like it guys, c&c are most welcome. more power to cgp!!!

red na red a,hehehe ok to,parang kulang lang liwanag yung pinlight,just my observation

suggestion: do not put a symmetrical composition. automatic na competition ng left and right side and see the red is too strong right dahil sa malakas talaga ang red ay nasa gitna pa ang camera. may i suggest to look at the "rule of third" in the composition. imho lang ha..

ayos naman sir,,mukang malakas lang talaga yung red at parang ng bleed pa ata siya,i like the way you give light sa mga showcases,, post more pa jan sir:doublethu:

noted po sir valeriano, salamat sa inyong pagbisita.

sir nomer your right, dagdag kaalaman ito ah, thank you so much.

salamat sir arkitorture. noted po.

nasobrahan yung red bro.. hinaan lng ng konti.. great render pa rin.. keep it up...

nomeradona wrote:suggestion: do not put a symmetrical composition. automatic na competition ng left and right side and see the red is too strong right dahil sa malakas talaga ang red ay nasa gitna pa ang camera. may i suggest to look at the "rule of third" in the composition. imho lang ha..

i agree with this... and the color bleeding also... pero nevertheless matindi ka talaga sa mga retails and booths

design and composition for me is fine, you might want to use falloff on your material so you can minimize the strong contrast of the color, and you can use vray override material to avoid color bleeding also, hope it helps... keep it up.. God Bless....

sir mokong, medyo madugo nga, ahihihi, yan kasi yung pallete nila. salamat po sa pagdaan.

sir kietsmark, try ko pong i-overite yung vray matl., salamat po at naapreciate nyo yung mga gawa ko.

mastersketzzz, noted po, thank you po sa comment and suggestions.

hi sir mac... nice output!!

nasabi nila ang mga comments.
nakakalula lng ang height nya..
cgro dahil sa camera angle lng.
or if mataas ang height nya, suggest lng ako
to have a break sa pagiging highness nya.. sa aken lng namn yun..hehehe
pero i like the design and its layout....

overall sir mac!! great job...


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lapit na balik nng partner in crime mo dyan!!hehehe

sir junel, kamustasas, salamat po sa inyong comments, bale yung height nya ay 4350mm then nag drop ako nang 300mm (clear) for cove lights, actually hindi pa ako nakapunta sa site, busy kasi duon sa isang villa project (detailing na sa CAD), i agree, some design on the ceiling will make it more interesting, kaso sir may nagdesign na nito, 2nd revision and render ako dito, ahihihi. *(first revision ay si master joven).

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oo nga eh, bugbog kami sigurado next month, kasi magbabakasyon yung mga kapanaan. patapos na rin lean season sa exhibition, kaya kailangan na si pakner aka master "burit king" joven, ahihihihi...

same kay sir nomer...give a much better angle...para di one point perspective...nice render!

ot:peace tayo ha!ayoko na dagdagan mga mgbestfriend dito!nyahahahhaha

no worries sir jenaro, salamat po sa inyong comment.

mac latest work mo ba to? Try mo bro babaan ang (GI) secondary bounces from 1 down to minimize red color sa envi mo. Then kung di mo pa makuha ang environment mo taasan mo din .,...sana makatulong bro...gusto ko makita ulit to request lang.

bong, musta?, salamat sa inyong pagdaan, noted yan bro, sige try ko ulit irender bro.

ayos sir,,, ok lang sa akin kahit nag bleed,,, malakas talaga pag red,,,

bro. mammoo_03

aside dun sa bleeding ng colour red. ok na render scene parin siguro nasabi na nila yng mga dapat mong gawin. Good job parin bro keep it up! and post more.

keep bleeding love ^^

but nicely done sir. . .

salamat mga sir, i appreciate all of your comments and suggestion, try ko po i update soon.

nice one mac, nice render...

nice render sir,,, nasabi napo comments,,, keep it up sir!!!

sa akin ayos na eto bro.. prang may color bleeding lang ung red...

-pwede mo rin cguro maalis ung sa PS -adjust auto color..

pra napakalaki ng space..prang kulang..cguro try to change the white flooring suggestion lang...

the rest panalo na

sir! comments have been posted! just follow na lang!

salamat sa inyong pagdaan mga kapatid na alwin, grayback, noel at mailman.