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CC nman puh dito,,sana mgustuhan nyu mga master.....

Sir,
Imho remove the reflection and add texture sa road.. Trees more pa.. Keep it up always..

sir...reflection ng road poh....liit poh ng tao sa my car...try nyo glass reflection pra ok tingnan..

keep it up.....

Sir oneal ito ba bago niyo gawa? naks naman improving hah...comments ko lang wag mo na lang lagyan ng reflection yung road mo,2nd yung shadow mo sa car sa ilalim kunting dark pa at blue or green sa window...ayos mag Vray ka na kasi yaan mo malapit ka na matuto niyan...God bless bro

not bad sir oneal roda, add ko lang po sa comment ay yung scale nang mga mapping, entourage and bumps. regarding naman po sa canopy sa garage, mas maganda kung may support syang post, mahaba po ata yung span nung roof.

keep on posting sir.

Ok na ito Sir. Lots of Improvement, Minor Comments lng Roof Ridge, Yung tao at sasakyan parang nka lutang, lagyan mo nlng ng kunting depth sa PS,
Work more in PS work, lalo na sa Masking ng mga plants sa BG, halatang cropted sya, lastly sa Lighting parang dark masyado ang soffit mo yung ibang part naman hindi, yun lng bro keep posting...


I like the Design Bro Keep it UP...


SU Render

agree with sir mamoo... masyado mahaba ung canopy na iyon... and ung trees s likod sir mejo mataas ata... shadows sir more dark pa and ung reflection sir s roads... anu nga pla software gamit mo sir??? keep posting sir

Yup canopy mabigat sobra..poste kailangan..Better pag aralan mo muna basic stucture ng house before rendering sir...wala yata ridge roll or malabo lang mata ko..

Nice start..Tambay ka dito dami tuturo sa iyo!!

Thanks for sharing and keep posting! You'll learn alot here! GLHF!

imho..un nkabike po sir stretched...mas ok po ito kung nka 2pt perspective..nice design sir..rendering is ok din for me sir

use 3d trees, cars and people.. gaganda pa ang output mo kung gagamit ka nyan. have a good day

imho,,

needs a lot of improvement...
tambay lng po kau dito bos,,,

trees and backgrounds car looks vector..imho lang po

malaking potential nito gawa mo bro.

ok ang form mo, ok din ang mga materials mo.

maayos naman ang entourage. since sa photoshop mo lang nilagay.

also, you should learn vray, para lumabas ang tunay na ganda nito. good luck bro.

icefrik19 wrote:trees and backgrounds car looks vector..imho lang po

wala p kc aku pang landscape n materials bka pwd mkahirit sir.....tnk u s cc nyu

Bro, i agree with sir bokks, sa tingin ko palitan mo lang yung road map, background at shader ng mga cars ok na ok na, siguro sa materials lang talaga at render engine, sa roof din pala add ka ng ridge, sa design naman ok na ok keep it up bro! practice lang tayo ng practice at huhusay din tayo! post more, goodluck

aldrinv2 wrote:Sir,
Imho remove the reflection and add texture sa road.. Trees more pa.. Keep it up always..

thank you puh dun s cc...babaguhin q..nxt tym post q uli ung mga pagbabagu.

mammoo_03 wrote:not bad sir oneal roda, add ko lang po sa comment ay yung scale nang mga mapping, entourage and bumps. regarding naman po sa canopy sa garage, mas maganda kung may support syang post, mahaba po ata yung span nung roof.

keep on posting sir.

thank you sa cc nyu...actually nbagu n yan tapus n yang house n yan..my poste n yung canopy sa garage,,,..