my 1st post..

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elow po mga masters..1st post q po d2, stil studyng 3dmax,pa cnc nman po,,pa2long na dn sa tipz..tnx po

rock.on.....

nice render sir keitzkoy..imho adjust lang po ng brightness and contrast ok na ok na to ..keep it up!btw welcome to cgp

hi sir! this is a good start!! nice lighting there! medyo ibahin lang po natin ung bg (background) and try to de saturate it a little bit by adjusting ur color mapping or by post compositing in an image editing software!!!!

anyway great modeling skills!!! post more!!!!

woooow heheanliwanag sir.. cro pati nrin ung kulay warm colors sana.. ganun pa man, nice render

welcome to cgp bro! tambay-tambay lang dito maraming mahuhusay dito na willing mag-share ng knowldedge, tips and techniques...this is a good post...nice start bro!

iba gad la h koy.., hehe cuay ni.. muzta na pre?

oi bosing galing

- 1st ko tlga napnsin is ung bldg rflction sa glass,,parang kilala ko ung ngrender nyan,,hehe,,,very familiar,,hehehehe,,(akin pala)
- lighting is too much,,babaan nyo po ung intensity
- too much contrast
- prang ang sikip ng road for 2 way..
- hanap ka ng ibang sky
- ung bldg na bg hnd ng fit,,hanap ka rin ng iba
- side walk is almost level na sa road
- just notice ung rlfction ng magpartner sa right side,,same cla?
cgro 3d people nlng pra mas ok
- add signages nlng din sa commercial spaces
- red car is too rflctive din
- ung sa upper part,,may blak part dun,,nasunog yata,,

un lng namn sa akin ser,,nice start po,,hntay lng po tau sa mga masters dito...welcom po

tnx po sa lhat ng coment, noted po lhat yan,hehe..

til nxt post po,sna auz na rendering q nxtym,panu po mgadjust ng brightness?

inubos na ni master jarul eh... practice lang palagi sir...

I'm sure everyone already mentioned some of the areas that might need improvement - one thing I noticed is that the sky color does not match the orangey tones of the rendering making it look not-so-goody-photoshopped.

nice work sir welcome to CGP!

nice render po..

mxado lng maliwanag ung texture mo po...

background didnt match the scene...
mapping and scaling issue. IMHO.

tama si jarul sir sundin mo lang yung mga comments niya!

mukhang kilala ko gumawa ng building na nasa background mo ah? for sure gustong gusto mo yun ahehehe...
smorgasboard eto bro, pinaghalo... good try... praktis lang ng praktis... pag aralan mo yung gawa ng mga masters dito...
goodluck!