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cheesy ang building...
background is empty
camera angle
road texture too dark
doors
car doesnt fit the house
lighting scene needs more work

overall.. more practice .

kumpyuter MAster wrote:cheesy ang building...
background is empty
camera angle
road texture too dark
doors
car doesnt fit the house
lighting scene needs more work

overall.. more practice .

Noted yan kumpyutermaster..anyway, can you show us some of your designs so that we can have some references...TUTs naman dyan.

the lighting is ok, but too much intensity on some areas, maybe you can reduce the multiplier of the sun to fix this.
textures needs improvement.
-wall textures look flat.
-roof material should have glossy reflections
-glass reflections a bit off (or maybe because the interior areas is too dark, to fix this try to add vray lights inside the rooms and add some interior elements like curtains)
-change the car
-back ground is ok but it looks as if the building is floating (left side area), check horizon line.
-some plant colors are too saturated.
-add some exterior light fixtures (small details like this means a lot)
-what are those black elements under the roof? maybe you could omit those if we don't need them.

That's it for me. Hope you can show us the improved version soon.

ralph_soriano wrote:the lighting is ok, but too much intensity on some areas, maybe you can reduce the multiplier of the sun to fix this.
textures needs improvement.
-wall textures look flat.
-roof material should have glossy reflections
-glass reflections a bit off (or maybe because the interior areas is too dark, to fix this try to add vray lights inside the rooms and add some interior elements like curtains)
-change the car
-back ground is ok but it looks as if the building is floating (left side area), check horizon line.
-some plant colors are too saturated.
-add some exterior light fixtures (small details like this means a lot)
-what are those black elements under the roof? maybe you could omit those if we don't need them.

That's it for me. Hope you can show us the improved version soon.

Salamat po sa mga suggestion master ralph..noted po yan

the background not good , I think a bluesky with little clouds is reasonable .
And the black sticks seem tobe don't neccesary

ganda mam! parang ikaw lang!

Arkipao13 wrote:

kumpyuter MAster wrote:cheesy ang building...
background is empty
camera angle
road texture too dark
doors
car doesnt fit the house
lighting scene needs more work

overall.. more practice .

Noted yan kumpyutermaster..anyway, can you show us some of your designs so that we can have some references...TUTs naman dyan.

apparently medyo bz ako.. sa ginagawa kong masterpiece.. hik hik..

nice effort and good modeling skills