night scene photoshop rendering practice

pa c and c naman po for improvement. pinagprapractisan ko po tong tutorial ni sir evsu http://www.cgpinoy.org/t6430-night-rendering-in-ps-advance-technique pero ang layo po ng gawa ko sa gawa niya.. haha...


ito po yung original scene




ito po yung night scene... ang layo sa gawa ni sir evsu

Good day po miss.
It is very important for an artist to feel his/her work. Tutorials are just to give you clues of what to do. It is up to the artist to create his/her emotions in order to deliver a certain feelings to the viewer. I'm am not a guru but I just want you to unleashed more that artistic talent of yours through understanding more principles. Have a nice day.

points for improvements:
-yung glass pannels' reflection hindi tugma sa gradient sa background sky.
-intensity ng purple is so high.
-yung top edge ng glass building hindi tugma sa shadow ng left tree..yung finish ng corner should have shade.

suggestions:
-try to compliment the scene with a warm color lights in order to create harmony.

Try to be curious as possible and you'll find yourself ways to discover interesting options to improve you piece.

riel_gutchi wrote:Good day po miss.
It is very important for an artist to feel his/her work. Tutorials are just to give you clues of what to do. It is up to the artist to create his/her emotions in order to deliver a certain feelings to the viewer. I'm am not a guru but I just want you to unleashed more that artistic talent of yours through understanding more principles. Have a nice day.

points for improvements:
-yung glass pannels' reflection hindi tugma sa gradient sa background sky.
-intensity ng purple is so high.
-yung top edge ng glass building hindi tugma sa shadow ng left tree..yung finish ng corner should have shade.

suggestions:
-try to compliment the scene with a warm color lights in order to create harmony.

Try to be curious as possible and you'll find yourself ways to discover interesting options to improve you piece.

thankyou po