Farnsworth House-Ludwig Mies Van Der Rohe

My rendition of Farnsworth House


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una na ako sir..galing! sana may iba pang views..map lang ba yung background? tsaka reflection siguro sa glass sir..talaga po ba nakalutang yung hagdan? hintayin na lang natn comments ng mga master..

nice try to this model sir....this are my friendly comment
- improve background...hindi nag feet sa model...( angle, shadow, mood)
- what happen to your stair?...
- camera focus... parang naputol ata si model
- overexposed sa sun...pero sa likod mapuno

then wait natin ang iba....keep posting para makilala

welcome back master ryan santos...
your rendering output has improved.
work on:
scaling - structure is too small compared to your trees (BG) and grass. better mount your BG image on a plane/billboard so that you can control the scale by adjusting the distance of your BG image from the camera or re-scaling the billboard itself.
camera angle - if you notice iba yung camera angle ng BG mo compared to your structure. since you can't change the point of view (POV) of the BG, you need to somehow adopt/sync your camera to that POV.
The same thing goes to your lighting setup, pansinin mo yung trees nasa harap ang shadow ibig sabihin nasa likod ang ilaw, but the shadow of your structure is casting shadow the other way, position yung Sun in such a way na mag match yung shadow ng structure mo sa shadow ng BG....
Lastly show the whole structure in the frame, add framing elements din.

Nice rendition Sir, most of my comments were mentioned already.