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Post by Dabuy02 Sun May 16, 2010 3:06 am

papost lang po ulit ....tnx kayo na po bhLa mga masters..

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sensya na sa grass... peace!
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Post by jheteg Sun May 16, 2010 3:25 am

displace and tiling lang po cguro sa grass at konting halamanan po sa harap. everything else maganda napo. thumbsup


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Post by Dabuy02 Sun May 16, 2010 3:33 am

noted po sir..Very Happy salamt sa pagdaan cabalen... thumbsup
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Post by ARIST Sun May 16, 2010 4:06 am

sadya po ba tong red (parang symbol) sa foreground trees sa bandang kanan?
same comment with sir jheteg, displacement, tiling sa grass. maski bump na lng sa driveway, saka lakihan na lang width or gawing curve yung corners sa driveway para mas madadalian yung driver iliko yung mga sasakyan. imho lang sir.
design, lighting, and rendering- maganda po. 2thumbsup
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Post by Dabuy02 Sun May 16, 2010 4:18 am

ARIST wrote:sadya po ba tong red (parang symbol) sa foreground trees sa bandang kanan?
same comment with sir jheteg, displacement, tiling sa grass. maski bump na lng sa driveway, saka lakihan na lang width or gawing curve yung corners sa driveway para mas madadalian yung driver iliko yung mga sasakyan. imho lang sir.
design, lighting, and rendering- maganda po. 2thumbsup


sir arist salamat sa pagdaan and commnts.. d na po ako ng displace sa grass and bump sa pavmnt kasi hirap na pc ko bka magcrash nlang bandang huli,, Smile syanG din time,, sa drive po,, sadyang single car lang tlga pwd dumaan and sa tingin ko kaya nag mukha maliit dhl nrin cgro sa postion ng cam? .. hehe... regarding nmn po dun sa red symbol. hndi ko napansin na may gnyan pla hehe bka bunga lng yan ng tree na gnamit ko hehehe.. nwY maraming salamt po sa commnts and suggstion... 2thumbsup
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Post by markitekdesign Sun May 16, 2010 4:20 am

ayos na ayos bro...update mo nalang yong grass para lalong astig yong gawa mo...nice design... 2thumbsup
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Post by Dabuy02 Sun May 16, 2010 4:23 am

ei revit master.. tgl din ako d nka post hehe... yup bro update ko paG may time sa ngayon mdyo bc tlga... maraming salamt bro sa pagdaan thumbsup
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Post by akoy Sun May 16, 2010 5:53 am

galeng ng roof and lighting
grass and tiling sa post parang malake sakin
over bump ata sa entrance wall
IMHO lang naman sir 2thumbsup
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Post by qcksilver Sun May 16, 2010 6:54 am

ayos to bro tanong ko lang dalawa ung type ng grass?tonting tweak nalang ung glass check mo ung sa right side ng house parang butas lang ung mga window tapus nakita ung sa likod?get my point?goodluck sa update,cabalen mabuhay ka ehehe
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Post by cloud20 Sun May 16, 2010 7:40 am

First off lose the textspeak napapaghalata po tayong di nagbabasa ng rules or the other sections (aside from archi) for that matter. Andami na pong discussions tungkol diyan.
Nakapag comment na ako about the whole sun behind the house drama effect; maganda ang effect nito---kung kaya mong gawin. As it shows di nyo po kaya... Sunog ang grass niyo dun sa parteng naarawan... Sunog din ang SUV natin... Malamang you faked the lighting pa nyan naglagay pa po ba kayo sa harapan?... Dagdag pa sa rendering time yan...
Lose the peeps, mukhang manikin it kills the realism in a realism lacking scene...
Humihingi ka ng pasensya sa grass; tinamad po ba tayo na ayusin ito bago dalhin dito sa CGP?...
Maganda ang design ng house... Brought down by the above inconsistencies...
I'll wait for your next try...
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Post by Canadium Sun May 16, 2010 7:44 am

Very nice house design Sir! The house model is well built and very detailed. The lighting is also great! Most of the comments have been said already but I would like to add another one. Since the driveway is intended for only one car and cannot be widened, I think you should provide a bigger turn radius at the intersection that may extend into the garage. It looks very challenging to drive on that sharp intersection.
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Post by bartsimpson Sun May 16, 2010 8:05 am

Canadium wrote:Very nice house design Sir! The house model is well built and very detailed. The lighting is also great! Most of the comments have been said already but I would like to add another one. Since the driveway is intended for only one car and cannot be widened, I think you should provide a bigger turn radius at the intersection that may extend into the garage. It looks very challenging to drive on that sharp intersection.

i agree thumbsup Very Happy
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Post by phranq Sun May 16, 2010 10:32 am

ganda ng design! 2thumbsup

comment lang, IMHO, medyo destructed ako ng trees sa foreground, sa akin wala na lang or isa lang. lumiliit kasi structure.
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Post by gerico_eco Sun May 16, 2010 10:33 am

grass lng din sakin... parang na burn ang image sir.. makukuha dina to.. 2thumbsup
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Post by Invincible Sun May 16, 2010 10:36 am

grass n lng fafs . .. ok na lighting mo overall alisin mo lng mga overburn areas . .konti n lng
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Post by deosrock Sun May 16, 2010 4:06 pm

-nice work.. work on your grass.. 2thumbsup
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Post by Dabuy02 Sun May 16, 2010 9:01 pm

akoy wrote:galeng ng roof and lighting
grass and tiling sa post parang malake sakin
over bump ata sa entrance wall
IMHO lang naman sir 2thumbsup

salamt sir update ko pag may tym.. Very Happy
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Post by Dabuy02 Sun May 16, 2010 9:04 pm

qcksilver_2005 wrote:ayos to bro tanong ko lang dalawa ung type ng grass?tonting tweak nalang ung glass check mo ung sa right side ng house parang butas lang ung mga window tapus nakita ung sa likod?get my point?goodluck sa update,cabalen mabuhay ka ehehe

ei cabalen.. nope isa lang grass na ginamit ko dito, wa sir try ko mag update pag may time bago ipatarp hehe salamat cabalen sa pagdaan. mabuhay ka rin cabalen hehe
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Post by Dabuy02 Sun May 16, 2010 9:37 pm

cloud20 wrote:First off lose the textspeak napapaghalata po tayong di nagbabasa ng rules or the other sections (aside from archi) for that matter. Andami na pong discussions tungkol diyan.
Nakapag comment na ako about the whole sun behind the house drama effect; maganda ang effect nito---kung kaya mong gawin. As it shows di nyo po kaya... Sunog ang grass niyo dun sa parteng naarawan... Sunog din ang SUV natin... Malamang you faked the lighting pa nyan naglagay pa po ba kayo sa harapan?... Dagdag pa sa rendering time yan...
Lose the peeps, mukhang manikin it kills the realism in a realism lacking scene...
Humihingi ka ng pasensya sa grass; tinamad po ba tayo na ayusin ito bago dalhin dito sa CGP?...
Maganda ang design ng house... Brought down by the above inconsistencies...
I'll wait for your next try...

sir cloud20 pasensya na po kasi hindi ako gaano nakakapag open ng account ko dahil medyo busy kaya hindi ako aware masyado sa mga bagong rules.. ang gusto ko lng po kasi makapagshare ng mga works. pasensya na po and sorry sa matter na yun.
about sa drama effect na sinasabi niyo po, siguro nasa artist na po yun kung ano idea or presentation gagawin niya dba po sir?
kung sinasabi niyo po na hindi ko nakaya,ang sa akin lang naman po eh atleast i tried hindi po ba? at dahil dun nakita ko mga dapat gawin sa tulong rin po ng mga kacgp natin at kayo para maimprove pa po yung work ko. sa grass naman po, nakikita ko naman po tlga na mali and inaamin ko po na nagkamali po talaga ako hehe pasensya na po ulit. iuupdate ko po lahat ng comments pag naka free time po.. maraming salamat po sa pag appreciate ng design, salamat rin po pagdaan comments sir cloud20.. thumbsup more power cgp! 2thumbsup
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Post by Dabuy02 Sun May 16, 2010 9:40 pm

Canadium wrote:Very nice house design Sir! The house model is well built and very detailed. The lighting is also great! Most of the comments have been said already but I would like to add another one. Since the driveway is intended for only one car and cannot be widened, I think you should provide a bigger turn radius at the intersection that may extend into the garage. It looks very challenging to drive on that sharp intersection.

noted po yan sir canadium. salamat po sa pag appreciate 2thumbsup
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Post by Dabuy02 Sun May 16, 2010 9:42 pm

bartsimpson wrote:
Canadium wrote:Very nice house design Sir! The house model is well built and very detailed. The lighting is also great! Most of the comments have been said already but I would like to add another one. Since the driveway is intended for only one car and cannot be widened, I think you should provide a bigger turn radius at the intersection that may extend into the garage. It looks very challenging to drive on that sharp intersection.

i agree thumbsup Very Happy

salamat po sir bartsimpson thumbsup
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Post by Dabuy02 Sun May 16, 2010 9:44 pm

phranq wrote:ganda ng design! 2thumbsup

comment lang, IMHO, medyo destructed ako ng trees sa foreground, sa akin wala na lang or isa lang. lumiliit kasi structure.

salamat po sir.. yup noted po yan sir 2thumbsup
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