A 2 Storey - UPDATED

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Something that I dug up from my files from 2009. An unfinished work, that I decided to continue and finish. I did this one today, from start to finish. Done in max, rendered with vray, and edited in photoshop.

Comments are welcome.



Updated as per sir valiant's comments:



Updated as per sir kurdaps! request:

arkiedmund wrote:

arjun_samar wrote:Sir ed,

Wala na ako masabi, tanung ko nalang, ilang oras po ba nyo ginawa to? from modelling to postwork? thank you

A days work...sa texturing ako naabala, kasi hinanap ko pa sa mga files yung bitmaps na gusto ko, tapos naghouse chores pa ako, habang nanonood ng news...syempre..andyan din ang test renders, although saglit lang test renderinga, as each would only average at less than 5 mins on low settings, and on an 800x600pixels image size, minus all the entourage.

Salamat sa pagdaan.

Thanks po sir Ed.

jay3design wrote:nice render sir ganda

thanks sir...glad to see you around once again.

Nice. Ang linis.

go pa rin sa kin ang 1st image,more on yellow na 2nd e di sya nya natural sa mata halata na edited na sa ps.imho.

zdesign wrote:go pa rin sa kin ang 1st image,more on yellow na 2nd e di sya nya natural sa mata halata na edited na sa ps.imho.

I love the 1st image also. Pero edited din sa ps yun...i was really trying to tone down the yellows hence the 1st image was my choice. Thanks for dropping by.

ed thanks for the update... i appreciate your effort... i prefer your update kasi ramdam agad ung mood na parang sunny day then natakpan ng bahagya ng ulap ang araw... and hindi rin nagmukhang nag-colorbleed ung blue sky sa structure. keep it up.

I like it Ed.

Few comments lang:
1. Can you make an eye level for your camera, medyo mataas kasi. I wan to see kung ano yung view in reality.
2. Yung tree branch sa right side is off, considering its along the road.

Design is good!

kurdaps! wrote:I like it Ed.

Few comments lang:
1. Can you make an eye level for your camera, medyo mataas kasi. I wan to see kung ano yung view in reality.
2. Yung tree branch sa right side is off, considering its along the road.

Design is good!

1.mataas pa ba ang eye level? try kong mag render ulit..nasa 1.5 meters na kasi ang height niya
2. yung tree for effect lang sir, bare kasi yung side na yun without them tree branch...he he he, pero yung camera nasa other side ng street na 8 meters...

Try kong magrender ng isa pang view kung may time, nag aaral kasi ako sa gabi ngayon. Comments are noted...thanks for passing by.

Nice design again sir...ganda na ng lighting mo pre...a little bluish lang sa monitor ko..

ed... my apology... i took the liberty of grabbing your image and do some adjustments in photoshop for i really like the totallity of work you put on this one. just to satisfy myself and see kung ano magiging itsura pag medyo tinapangan pa ung contrast.

arkiedmund wrote:

kurdaps! wrote:I like it Ed.

Few comments lang:
1. Can you make an eye level for your camera, medyo mataas kasi. I wan to see kung ano yung view in reality.
2. Yung tree branch sa right side is off, considering its along the road.

Design is good!

1.mataas pa ba ang eye level? try kong mag render ulit..nasa 1.5 meters na kasi ang height niya
2. yung tree for effect lang sir, bare kasi yung side na yun without them tree branch...he he he, pero yung camera nasa other side ng street na 8 meters...

Try kong magrender ng isa pang view kung may time, nag aaral kasi ako sa gabi ngayon. Comments are noted...thanks for passing by.

Here, I did some check. The horizon is above your windows that is beyond 2M++....I dont know if I did this right?

^^
ok sir kurdaps....i'll make the adjustments..thanks a lot sir....lupit niyo sir ha...idol!!

Here's another update as per sir kurdaps request:

@valiant: nice one sir...a nice version as well...thanks for sharing..

ortzak wrote:Nice design again sir...ganda na ng lighting mo pre...a little bluish lang sa monitor ko..

Thanks sir...i am using an lcd monitor that's a bit old(given by my brother)..2000:1 pa ang aspect ratio nito...hahaha..hope i can have this calibrated properly.

very nice visualization Master Arkied... love the lighting..

cgil wrote:very nice visualization Master Arkied... love the lighting..

Thanks a lot sir...trying my best to be at least consistent...hope i can do better next time...

ganda na sir..pero mdyo kunti na lang natitira sa taas.(sky).move nyo na lang sa taas yung target ng cam..yun lang sir.thanks.

exodus wrote:ganda na sir..pero mdyo kunti na lang natitira sa taas.(sky).move nyo na lang sa taas yung target ng cam..yun lang sir.thanks.

comment noted po...salamat