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Hotel Kitchen
share ko lang po ung bagong gawa ko sa vray office project po ito, puro evermotion po ginamit hirap kasi mag model sa max hehe! 2nd post ko po ito ng interior with the help of master arkiedmund. C&C are always welcome. Thanks CGP!
Last edited by bobpen on Sun May 09, 2010 10:15 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Hotel Kitchen
Nice post bro. suggest ko crop mo nalang yung right side area mo, mga 1/5, kahit wala ng plant ok lang. maganda na kasi ang composition mo dito sa left side. keep it up bro!
Saka pala wag mo sana i-crop yung support ng upuan. show a little more flooring. maganda to sa 800x600 portrait config.
Saka pala wag mo sana i-crop yung support ng upuan. show a little more flooring. maganda to sa 800x600 portrait config.
Last edited by bokkins on Sun May 09, 2010 10:12 am; edited 1 time in total
Re: Hotel Kitchen
slamat po master bokkins me tutorials po ke master arkiedmund yan hehe! Thanks CGP!
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Re: Hotel Kitchen
nice one...magcomment din ako for further improvement....
- parang mataas masyado ang camera angle..like the viewer's height is almost the same as the floor to ceiling clearance.
- check scale of the bar counter, in reference to ceiling height. Maybe you shoudl tweak your camera, as i suspect it's the one giving the illusion of some scale issues on your scene.
-overall, lighting is nice..
- parang mataas masyado ang camera angle..like the viewer's height is almost the same as the floor to ceiling clearance.
- check scale of the bar counter, in reference to ceiling height. Maybe you shoudl tweak your camera, as i suspect it's the one giving the illusion of some scale issues on your scene.
-overall, lighting is nice..
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Re: Hotel Kitchen
I hope you don't mind bro, ito yung ibig kong sabihin sa earlier comment ko about cropping. Nanotice ko pala ang laki ng improvement mo bro. Keep it up!
Re: Hotel Kitchen
-overall, lighting is nice..hehe! nag comment din kayo sa gawa ko.
nice one...magcomment din ako for further improvement....
- parang mataas masyado ang camera angle..like the viewer's height almost the same as the floor to ceiling clearance.
- check scale of the bar counter, in reference to ceiling height. Maybe you shoudl tweak your camera, as i suspect it's the one giving the illusion of some scale issues on your scene.
-mababa lang po talaga ceiling nya 2.1 mtr lang po
-bar counter height po 1.1 mtr ayon sa details
-camera ko po 55 cguro dapat 50 lang po
salamat po ng marami master arkiedmund sa uulitin po pag me time kayo! Thanks CGP!
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Re: Hotel Kitchen
noted po master bokkins! salamat!additional suggestion bro. paintings na nakaframe sa wall or simple pictures.
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ok lang po sa pag edit, salamat din po sa pag comment keep trying to improve pa po sa mga susunod basta po nandyan kayo mga master matututo lahat ng members dito. thanks po master bokkins! thanks CGP!I hope you don't mind bro, ito yung ibig kong sabihin sa earlier comment ko about cropping. Nanotice ko pala ang laki ng improvement mo bro. Keep it up!
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Re: Hotel Kitchen
jejeje, pinakelaman pa, ala namang pinag bago, pangit pa rin..I hope you don't mind bro, ito yung ibig kong sabihin sa earlier comment ko about cropping. Nanotice ko pala ang laki ng improvement mo bro. Keep it up!
@bobpen, pare mukang plastic mga accessories mo halatang halatang 3d tuloy. at parang kulang ka ng lighting fixtures sa karugtong na area. ano? di ba.
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Re: Hotel Kitchen
jejeje, pinakelaman pa, ala namang pinag bago, pangit pa rin.
@bobpen, pare mukang plastic mga accessories mo halatang halatang 3d tuloy. at parang kulang ka ng lighting fixtures sa karugtong na area. ano? di ba.
ayusin ko po sa susunod.
puro evermotion lang po kasi ginamit ko sa accesories default na sya.
yung lighting po sinunod ko lang yung reflected ceiling plan.
nag aadjust pa po kasi ako ng lighting at mapping di ko pa kasi gamay ang 3dmax. Thanks po sa pagdaan bago lang po ba kayo? ako bago lang. Welcome sa CGP!
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Re: Hotel Kitchen
bobpen wrote:jejeje, pinakelaman pa, ala namang pinag bago, pangit pa rin.
@bobpen, pare mukang plastic mga accessories mo halatang halatang 3d tuloy. at parang kulang ka ng lighting fixtures sa karugtong na area. ano? di ba.
ayusin ko po sa susunod.
puro evermotion lang po kasi ginamit ko sa accesories default na sya.
yung lighting po sinunod ko lang yung reflected ceiling plan.
nag aadjust pa po kasi ako ng lighting at mapping di ko pa kasi gamay ang 3dmax. Thanks po sa pagdaan bago lang po ba kayo? ako bago lang. Welcome sa CGP!
dami na spammers ah.
BTT:
Ok lang naman evermotion, just learn how you'll put it in your scene to make your renders more convincing.
Keep practicing.
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Re: Hotel Kitchen
salamat po sa pagdaan sir yaug_03. thanks CGP! God bless!dami na spammers ah.
BTT:
Ok lang naman evermotion, just learn how you'll put it in your scene to make your renders more convincing.
Keep practicing..
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