Girl's Bedroom

Ayan, finally 1st post ko sa 3d hehehe.. at 1st work ko din using Mental Ray. C&C are most welcome.. special thanks kay darwinzzkie sa mga tips while working on this tska kay sir kietsmark at arkiedmund..

Not bad! mmm...I'm not a MR user..Kaya wala akong ma comment about technicalities. Pero, may commenst lang ako sa rendering.

1. Overbright and flat po ang images add more dept. (Oi...pinalitan mo na pala eh..) ok hindi na overbright..
2. Add more reflections especially sa mga timber textures mo
3. Carpet and bedside table are floating?
4. Open mo kunti ang draperies and let the sunshine in...
5. Drapes look stiff
6. Texture po sa bed na tata-tile...
7. Wala pong door knob
8. TV and laptop screen hindi po nag go-glow or not emitting some light
9. Try render on higher resolution next time..

mmm anu pa ba I think thats all.. Hope to see more of ur renderings.

Thanks for sharing I hope makakatulong ang mga CCs ko..

Good luck!

wireframan wrote:Not bad! mmm...I'm not a MR user..Kaya wala akong ma comment about technicalities. Pero, may commenst lang ako sa rendering.

1. Overbright and flat po ang images add more dept
2. Add more reflections especially sa mga timber textures mo
3. Carpet and bedside table are floating?
4. Open mo kunti ang draperies and let the sunshine in...
5. Drapes look stiff
6. Texture po sa bed na tata-tile...
7. Wala pong door knob
8. TV and laptop screen hindi po nag go-glow or not emitting some light
9. Try render on higher resolution next time..

mmm anu pa ba I think thats all.. Hope to see more of ur renderings.

Thanks for sharing I hope makakatulong ang mga CCs ko..

Good luck!

thanks sir! kaka start ko lng din kc mag3d so ayan haha.. slamat sa comments noted po lhat

ayun, not bad ok na yan for a starter actually mas magaling kapa sakin imagine in just a matter of few days nakagawa ka ganyan it takes me month before ako nakagawa ganyan sa mental ray before so masasabi ko your good.

practice lang next time vray naman.

wow nice! ayan mental ray user. dumadami na ah. looking good. keep it up!

nice start sir!! color combi + too much clutter lang po!

darwinzzkie wrote:ayun, not bad ok na yan for a starter actually mas magaling kapa sakin imagine in just a matter of few days nakagawa ka ganyan it takes me month before ako nakagawa ganyan sa mental ray before so masasabi ko your good.

practice lang next time vray naman.

ahahaha thanks to you! kaw nagturo eh

bokkins wrote:wow nice! ayan mental ray user. dumadami na ah. looking good. keep it up!

thank you sir boks! dami tlga mabait dito sa cgp

ortzak wrote:nice start sir!! color combi + too much clutter lang po!

sir, mam po ako .. noted po thank you sa comment

ayun! i agree with wireframan... keep on practicing lang makukuha mo rin yan...

kietsmark wrote:ayun! i agree with wireframan... keep on practicing lang makukuha mo rin yan...

practice makes perfect, but then again nobody's perfect so why practice? ahahaha joke.. of course practice pa ng practice.. kelangan yun.. slamat sir!

not bad at all... id like to commend the lil play on the ies.... great start from you sir. i guess sir wireframan have noted a good crit on ur work. try to take to achieve the crits and this would be better. post more.

vamp_lestat wrote:not bad at all... id like to commend the lil play on the ies.... great start from you sir. i guess sir wireframan have noted a good crit on ur work. try to take to achieve the crits and this would be better. post more.

Sir? mam po ako hehe.. thank you po noted lahat yan hehe.. practice practice pa ako.. hehe

Not bad for a starter, mental ray pa..ayus na ayus!!

Nasabi na nila ang comments eh...

dagdag nalang ako:

1. Yung sofa parang malaki, or out of scale..or baka camera lang.
2. Tweak mo pa yung exposure control mo....i think gamit mo logarithmic exposure control..adjust mo lang yung brgthness and darkness values, to a more balanced image illumination.
3. based board parang mababa.

Yan..hope makatulong sa yo...till next post...

arkiedmund wrote:Not bad for a starter, mental ray pa..ayus na ayus!!

Nasabi na nila ang comments eh...

dagdag nalang ako:

1. Yung sofa parang malaki, or out of scale..or baka camera lang.
2. Tweak mo pa yung exposure control mo....i think gamit mo logarithmic exposure control..adjust mo lang yung brgthness and darkness values, to a more balanced image illumination.
3. based board parang mababa.

Yan..hope makatulong sa yo...till next post...

salamat po! noted yan.. sa camera lang siguro scaled naman po ang mga furniture.. hehe
salamat mga masters!

Ayan Mental Ray render. Nice start maam. If you have time, care to post this under my thread under Mental Ray section? Salamat

Alicecocoz wrote:Ayan Mental Ray render. Nice start maam. If you have time, care to post this under my thread under Mental Ray section? Salamat

cge maam post ko po.. thanks